Reviews for Pride of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! Great chapter. I lived it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! Theyre in trouble now. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im hooked! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chaptee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It really bothers me that Hermione didn't say a thing to Dumbledore about who the mole was, or should I say rat? This Hermione seems a little dim. Perfectly content to sit back and watch history repeat itsself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet chappy |
![]() ![]() ![]() To much of the everyday here. The constant focus on the relationship between Black, Potter and Snape DOES get tedious after awhile. Where is the action? Found this chapter boring. The defense class was the only part I sorta liked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter! Great idea for a watch. Nice to see Hermione gaining allies. Weird combining the unforgivables. I thought that the Imperio was supposed to make you not feel anything but good. I guess for the sake of the story, torture gets though. Love your overall creativity. Character all seem about right. Hermione being a super warrior over some is a bit of a stretch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done. This was an enjoyable story to read, had a bit of everything. Thank you. |