Reviews for Pride of Time
SkyRose16 chapter 10 . 1/23/2024
Lol! Great chapter. I lived it!
SkyRose16 chapter 9 . 1/23/2024
Great chapter!
SkyRose16 chapter 8 . 1/23/2024
Lol! Theyre in trouble now. Great chapter!
SkyRose16 chapter 7 . 1/23/2024
Great chapter!
SkyRose16 chapter 6 . 1/23/2024
Great chapter!
SkyRose16 chapter 5 . 1/23/2024
Loved it!
SkyRose16 chapter 4 . 1/23/2024
Im hooked!
SkyRose16 chapter 3 . 1/23/2024
Great chaptee!
SkyRose16 chapter 2 . 1/23/2024
Loved it!
SkyRose16 chapter 1 . 1/23/2024
Great chapter!
HelpmeHermione chapter 14 . 12/18/2023
It really bothers me that Hermione didn't say a thing to Dumbledore about who the mole was, or should I say rat? This Hermione seems a little dim. Perfectly content to sit back and watch history repeat itsself.
HelpmeHermione chapter 8 . 12/17/2023
Sweet chappy
HelpmeHermione chapter 7 . 12/17/2023
To much of the everyday here. The constant focus on the relationship between Black, Potter and Snape DOES get tedious after awhile. Where is the action? Found this chapter boring. The defense class was the only part I sorta liked.
HelpmeHermione chapter 6 . 12/17/2023
I loved this chapter! Great idea for a watch. Nice to see Hermione gaining allies. Weird combining the unforgivables. I thought that the Imperio was supposed to make you not feel anything but good. I guess for the sake of the story, torture gets though. Love your overall creativity. Character all seem about right. Hermione being a super warrior over some is a bit of a stretch.
quiet-mg chapter 50 . 12/4/2023
Very well done. This was an enjoyable story to read, had a bit of everything. Thank you.
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