C'est bien mieux que ce que j'ai vu du genres. L'histoire n'est pas prétentieux et commence bien.

this was honestly one of the best fanfics I've ever read, I laughed and cried and wept at different parts of this story. everything was meticulous and beautiful, and I enjoyed this immensely!

wow, what a chapter! so many surprises... first, that Dumbledore decides to share the complete prophecy with them bothHermione's 5th year in her old life would never be the same again. Dumbledore seems less secretive, which is surely a good thing. And maybe also less judgemental of Snape and almost trying to ship him and Hermione togetherbecause surely Snape could easily pass on info directly to Dumbledore once he is employed at Hogwarts.
I am still left wondering whether Snape worked to get Voldy to make Hermione an offerhe is surprisingly unannoyed at her very Gryffindorish rejection. Lets hope he doesnt get orders to kill her any time soon. And Hermione is surprisingly unannoyed that Snape still lives and breathes for Lily while snogging her when he gets the chance... anyway, you really wowed me with this chapter, awesome writing!

nooo why did Hermione not try harder to dissuade Snape from taking the mark? to hell with timelines, they are messed up by now anyway. At the very least, the two of them could spend the summer together and take it from there...

for the record, I'm pretty sure the werewolf incident happened in the Marauders 5th year, but I see how it helps you develop the friendship btw Snape and Hermione. Fingers crossed he wont take the mark this summer. And wondering when he'll figure out she is a time traveller given the hints she dropped about her friends who went to Hogwarts and are now goneassuming people would have remembered any recent student deaths... very curious when he will work it out!

I know this story is old and you might not read reviews any more, but I am really enjoying it! Fun concept, very fierce Hermionemaybe a little easy to trigger but she is still traumatized of courseand so strange to realize that since she is only a 5th year, she doesnt know any of Snape's backstory yet. Gryffindors are great friends indeed and Hermione's no nonsense attitude might just do Hogwarts of the 70s a world of good! thanks for the story!

Yea ive never seen a selfish hermione when it comes to Harry and hoenstly it’s disheartening. All potions is is followinf directions correctly unless ur a prodigy. And he knows hes not but hes using a tool thats helping him understand potions better and instead of being ok with that. This hermione knowing its safe to use, is jealous hearted and selfish . Harry needs liquid luck point blank simple her son is safe and snape risk his life every second of every day. One six hour dose of luck could either be wasted or a god send but using it at the right moment is hadd consideringbhe sees the dark lord almost all the time. Shes being unforgivingly selfish andni hoenstky hope at the end of all of this Harry tells her to kick ricks once he finds out. Cuz she deserves it. She has zero loyalty to her best friend all she thinks of him now is as some dumb kid miced up in a dangerous game and instead of help him she gaslights him berrats him and leaves him in the dark. She claims to see him as a brother but has no loyalty to him its controdictory and just God fucked up. And wven worse is Hermione straight up condoning and even wgging Snape on to be kore spiteful to Harry this story is fucked and i should atop but im invested now and i want to know how u end this godforskaen fix but god this is liking srinking acid

I hate when people make excuses for snapes behavior towards harry. Yes he had his reasons. And they were good ones and even in this fic he has his reasons. But snape even admitted himself he loaths Harry on principle of being James Son. The idea that u or anyone else expect Harry to be able let alone willing to see a betrer side to Snape when he has shown his ass since day one unrepently . Is just atrocious in nature. No one can be constnatly bullied and called names and like oh uea there was that one time he saved me but never admitted too it and then lied on my godfather. Like for Hemione to be so blind and obtuse is annoying. Like she acts like people and especially Harry should unwittingly thibk Snapss a good person when he constantly proves otherwise. Even when they found out he was an order memeber. He never once sat harry down ag Grimmuald and said yes ive been a class A jerk but its for a reason and i have to keep up appearences so forgive me if im constantly out of pocket . So how or why would Harry give a flying fuck if Snape lives or dies? No he just constantly antagonized the one peroan Harry saw as a father figure and then repeatedly threw his dead father in his face. For all the good Snape tried to do, his unrepentant nature negated all that. And dven if Hermione knows hes repentant , she also knows theres no one else who could know that and her frustration and vexation at Harry is once again her gaslighting him. This so oCC for Hermione that while i was enjoying this and out of bordom have continued to read . Idk how much futher i will get because this is fucked up.

Im gonna be honest, Hermione is annoying the fuck out of me. And maybe its just me, but i realize she went from being Harrys Best friend to his godmother and instead of talking to him and explaining what she knows not in detail but in theory. Helping him understand even if Malfoy is a DE the onky thing they could rational do is twll Dumbledor. The idea that she is legitimately gaslighting him is vexing beyond measure. Beccause no matter her reasons she knows the truth and be it about his godmother or draco or snape or even Dumbledor. She is gaslighting him. Hes legit apot on and instead of telling him to tell the proper authorities or to ask for adult help. She simply just ignores him or acts like his theories are crazy nonsense. Ahes not preserving the timeline anymore. Everything is up for grabs. And i understand her priorities have shifted from her childhood allegiances . But as his godmother on e he realizes the truth . There will be no excuse for how she flat out lied and gaslit him in her attempts to placate him.

Firebolt, u meant Fire Bolt. He already had a Nimbus two thousand. In third year sirius sent him the new Fire bolt.

Idk how to say this, but it feels like the only reason u wrote this was to change snapes fate and honestly thats pretty fucked up. Like the only person in the potter verse getting a happy ending is Snape? Like Maam are u nuts? Like , understandingn snape and liking his character is fine and dandy. But this is torcher , u basically kept the story the same just to give snape a love inteest other than Lily. This is horrifying , ive read some really messed up time travel fixs but this takes the cake and im not even halfway through? Bruh.

Ok gonna be honest, in this moment i feel as if Hermione is being purposefully crule. This is literally one moenbt thay she could change that wouldnt drastically change the timeline. Saving sirius and making sure Harry doesnt live in a cubbard under the stairs for the next ten years would be nothing. His mothers magic was in him. Its the blood wards that have nothing to do with Harrys protection. He could live with Sirius or Hell her. Shes being obstinate and thats vexing and it almost makes me want to punch her.

Ok this has to be said cuz its jarring and annoying. Lily and severus are in the same year Connically . The Muraders as well sre in the same year. Lily cant be head girl if shes not in Seventh year. Considerinf u have stated Snape is in 6th year that means lily and the Maruaders are too. IE Lily is not head girl . Shes a 6th year prefect . Its disorenting to read idk if you care or not but for future reference Head girl and Boy are a Seventh year position. Its making the story seem erratic when u call her head girl cuz it simply cant be true.

Amazing work! Thank you so much! :D

You have created a masterpiece. An Art. I can't fully put to words how beautiful this story is. I was put in a rollercoaster of plot and emotions, and I wouldn't mind going on this ride again in the near or far future. This is ine of the best snamione fics out there that I've read, and the very first child that I wanted to keep supporting in any of the fic I've read before.

Thank you, VERY much, for writing this, and for never giving up. I truly Thank you from the bottom of my heart