I came back to read this again. Its perfectly balanced with their personalities and fluff.
Thank you for sharing.

Wow! This is sooooo good. Makes me wish you were still writing Castle Fanfic.

The structure of the story worked well-especially the effective use of flashbacks in the timeline.

Not only do you do a good job of capturing the Canon characterization of Kate & Rick; but your secondary characters are simply marvelous creations. And the depth of picturesque detail in this story is outstanding. It was so realistic; as if I was walking thru a virtual canvas.

Thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful tale.

I love this!
Thank you for writing and sharing.

Lovely story. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Can't believe i never read this you for the lovely story

Jeez Castle is pathetic

Well that sounds like a solid marriage. Beckett is right, this pathetic loser shouldn't have married her.

Are they really supposed to be married ? he's surprised that his wife is worried about him ?

such an enjoyable story to read - wish you were still writing castle stories - helps me miss the series a little less

I'm embarrassed to tell you how many times I've this read this story but here I am reading it again. Truly one of my favorites in the Caskett fanfic universe.

okay so I was expecting another thing for the end but this fic was really good, the glimpses of angst that you threw here were great for not making this extra-fluff. this was very well-written and I liked reading this a lot. maybe I am hoping for a sequel of some sorts, I know this was published like 4 years ago, but it certainly have more story to develop here, so yes I really really would like a continuation, if you are not willing on writing it, it's okay heheheh congratulations for this good writing! :)

Well it was a weird story. Not bad at all but weird. The money deal felt sweet at first but then it became too much. I don't see Castle and Beckett acting immature and ridiculous like this because he bought something. And they felt way too insecure about the other for a married couple. It would have been more believable if it took place when they just started dating ...

I don't get it, they re cute and everything but it really doesn't feel like they're married. Because what kind of marriage is this when one think the other is just going to leave him like that ? Have they never talked about anything before getting married ? It's like they don't even know the others.
I like your other stories but this one is really weird, they really doesn't act like a couple on their honeymoon, especially Castle.

This proposal is so much better than the real one!

Your use of the little blue box was outstanding. I'm thankful to be reading this story in its completion as I would not have survived waiting for the next chapter. I found myself experiencing every bit of the angst offered by this situation. I slid down the wall in sorrow along with Rick. I understood both sides with equal intensity. Well written and thoroughly enjoyed!