Amazing proposal scene - loved the 'glimpses', the details... like her hair being messy, her hand being steady. And the emotion. Wow. Some powerful writing in this chapter.

The thought of these two on a leisurely honeymoon, discovering each other in new and familiar ways, is lovely in itself, but when they're this warm, and... hot, and wonderful, and so 'them', it takes it to a whole new level. I'm absolutely loving this story. Thanks so much for the gift of your writing.

Wonderful explanation of Kate's, so believable and true for Rick's heart!

Classic line, "her own body at home against his.". Oh wow, the imagery here - very hot!

What an amazing story ! I love how Kate shows more feelings for Rick gradually as the story progresses. There is so much love between them and we can feel it in each chapter. It is a story that we would like to see continue and never stop... But the end is still perfect. Thank you very much for this wonderful story so well written.

hilarious and wonderful shock (I gasped a bit there) when we discover that they're married

Good chapter

This is a lovely story full of the possibilities of what could happen if Kate and rick got married. I like the terms of the deal for the honeymoon - on Kate's terms. You have put some lovely detail into this? Looking forward to an update- hint hint! Thanks for sharing this story

I liked this:

And she forgets sometimes, how much words mean to him - even the tiny pronouns that she doesn't think twice about before using. Richard Castle believes in words and their power. She ought to remember this, ought to know it better than anyone else.

There's something very attractive about the idea of Castle telling a story in hesitant French. I imagine he's quite the raconteur :)

Castle knows just what to say in moments like these :)

I love France and the French people, so I really enjoyed their interaction with the locals in this chapter. I'm wondering if Kate is just worn out or if she's pregnant ...

Fabulous Beckett story! Liked this:

"And she did something very risky, something she hadn't done in many years. Something she probably wouldn't have done for anyone else." Kate bites her lip, meets his eyes. "She let him in."

Good grief that was good. A very believable and painful exploration of Castle's insecurities. And the scene in the rain ... :)

Best. Proposal scene. Ever.