Reviews for Water
Veronica Lacroix chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Very well done. I loved the allusion of the parable to the situation. Mind, it's from Connor's warped perception of justice, but you pulled it off. I had never considered that Connor would be brought up Christian, but given Holtz's position as a hunter and the era he came from it makes perfect sense that he would be religious. Brilliant. One minor thing, and I may be wrong, but isn't Canaan not Ca'naa?