Reviews for Black Velvet Kings
blackswaninlust chapter 17 . 11/7/2013
I know that great writers need time. With that said I just want you to know I think about your story and the characters. I have really loved the journey they have taken and look forward to the end. I am certain that it is soon.
missjaguar chapter 17 . 11/5/2013
My goodness this has made me cry and smile like nothing else. I couldn't stop reading :) Update soon pretty please? I honestly can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 11 . 10/15/2013
I'm glad she left. That would have been real nasty of her.
FinnMac chapter 17 . 10/15/2013
What a great chapter. So descriptive. Excellent.

It's been months since an update. Please don't leave this story unfinished. It's too good for that.
FinnMac chapter 16 . 10/15/2013
I think I understand a little more about why this is swinging Edward's way. But I'd still like you to dream up a Bree or a Kate for poor Garrett. She ought to be a knock-out and rock his world!
FinnMac chapter 15 . 10/15/2013
I assume "home" is the concert?
FinnMac chapter 14 . 10/15/2013
I was hoping, really hoping, that this was going to be a non-happily-ever-after story for Edward and Bella. I don't know...for some reason I just thought Edward didn't care enough, didn't fight enough...didn't earn it. I mean, Garrett deserves a little summin' summin' too!
FinnMac chapter 13 . 10/15/2013
FinnMac chapter 12 . 10/15/2013
What's in the box?
FinnMac chapter 10 . 10/14/2013
The lull before the storm?
FinnMac chapter 9 . 10/14/2013
I wonder what's really wrong with her.
FinnMac chapter 8 . 10/14/2013
Oh Lord, now what?!

"You didn't make a mistake; you made a decision." Great line.
FinnMac chapter 7 . 10/14/2013
Yeah, Edward, you should have given her a heads up, you jerk.
FinnMac chapter 6 . 10/13/2013
Douche bag.
FinnMac chapter 5 . 10/12/2013
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