Reviews for Internal Damage
Sparkyflame101 chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
This is a really good story, I love the plot line for it. Please update it I would love to be able to continue reding this story.
NightwingNinja17 chapter 3 . 11/11/2014
Please write more! I really like this story!
NovaTheHedgehog7500 chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
So I'm going to admit the I know little to nothing about NCIS. Until now. The story gives insight on it, and enough info to know the basic plot of the series. I can't wait to see what happens next! I feel so bad for Optimus. I think he needs a hug. And a medic.
Mr.A chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
I'm very impress that you write down a good, but funny story. Keep on working on it. :)
buslimpan chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
This is really good and intresting! I wonder how this will turn out!
Dreaming Star Traveler chapter 4 . 3/7/2014
Oh my good keep this one going its awesome!
professionalemail101 chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
SunsetRandom chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
i like this, please continue :)
SeventhEdition26 chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
I have just discovered a gem. This is totally awesome. Please continue this story.
Everon Prime chapter 4 . 7/23/2013
I really like this story, and I'm not usually a crossover fan! Could you please continue it?
Lady Minuialwen chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
Interesting story :D Please continue
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
Sounds like Optimus is badly hurt.
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
I hope Optimus will be okay.
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 2 . 6/21/2013
Looks like Optimus was leaking energon.
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I wonder why Optimus decided to park himself there.
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