Reviews for Just to Be
Hopeful-z chapter 29 . 12/8/2015
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Hopeful-z chapter 30 . 12/8/2015
Thank you for your good story. It was nice. These as the points I have to make about it:
1. Your plot was unique among all the fanfic I've read (a great accomplishment)
2. You have a good understanding of personalities and your characters were well defined, believable and consistent
3. Your description of Snape's emotions and thoughts in regard to Harry (obligation, regret, grief and hate) were one of the best I've ever read
4. It was unbelievable that three great heroes of their world could not save five girls from somehing that obviously illegal
The pace of the story was very good, but the final chapters were a little to much magical (unbelievable) AMD rushed for my taste
Hopeful-z chapter 12 . 12/5/2015
That proclamation of "Gryffindor" was like a new blank leaf being turned in the life of all those children.
Nicely done
Sammypenny chapter 30 . 11/29/2015
I really enjoyed this story. It was refreshing to read a HG/SS that wasn't centred around their relationship. I liked the interaction between the adults as they figured out how to work together. I particularily enjoyed Harry and Severus' relationship. Leo's character was awesome and I'd love to read about his Hogwart years, his adventures with Clara, his after Hogwart years, etc. I was kind of hoping Hermione and Severus would have their own child when the rest of the children were all grown and everybody would just spoil it but I understand why they wouldn't. Thank you for the wonderful and thoughtful story.
Guest chapter 23 . 11/21/2015
I think Harry should have been angrier at Severus for watching such a personal memory without permission. I would have been mad. Harry was like, well yep, I hope that makes it more understandable for you. See ya.
isophia0110 chapter 30 . 11/19/2015
I've read this twice now and its as heartbreaking and beautiful as it was before. I am speechless currently and can manage only a thank you right now. Thank you for taking out the tone to write this and then share it with us.
SweetCaterina chapter 2 . 11/12/2015
I'm getting more into it. I've always loved Snape and his sarcasm...
SweetCaterina chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
So far I'm loving this story. It's a different plot to which most people write. I'm looking forward to the next chapter...you have my attention!
arendora chapter 30 . 10/21/2015
I first would like to say that this stoy had me so completely wrapped up I forgor ro turn off my oven and birned a perfectly good turkey. That being said this is the absolute best fan fiction story I have EVER read and believe me when I say I haveread so many at this point I am hard pressed to find one that I haven't read. Thank you for this beautiful piece of work and I look forward to reading many more of your stories.

Amanda aka arendora
xxxWhySoSiriusxxx chapter 30 . 10/15/2015
I would just like to say this is an amazing story. You have accomplished what others have failed to do, make Severus a father but still keep true to the character in the original stories. I loved this story and I thank you for creating it and giving me the chance to read it. It refreshing to find a story with Hermione with someone other than Ron, and not have him be bashed through the whole plot. Once again THANK YOU!
Guest chapter 30 . 10/6/2015
So basically this is the end of the Snape, Granger, and Malfoy lines.
Guest chapter 25 . 10/6/2015
Awww, the obedient little sub is castigating herself for making a logical and independent decision to protect herself from her Dom. Somehow this doesn't surprise me. And how in the hell is Hermione in any way to blame? What, she should keep her past secret from Severus for fear of his temper or something?

How is this NOT an abusive relationship?
Guest chapter 24 . 10/6/2015
I like how 12 year old boys care more about freeing abused prostitutes than Snape does.

Ahh, and now Severus wants to slap Hermione around for daring to leave him for being an insulting disrespectful purposefully hurtful ass.

Abusive much?
Guest chapter 23 . 10/6/2015
So not only is your version of "hero" Severus an emotionally stunted bully, he's also a
brain rapist. How delightful.

I'm very glad that Severus' inability to stop his own temper tantrums has come back to bite him in the ass again and I'm glad that Hermione grew some balls and left. She doesn't deserve to be in such an emotionally, and eventually physically, abusive relationship. Severus' overbearing and over-controlling attitude toward her were bad enough.
Guest chapter 20 . 10/6/2015
This chapter read to me like Severus was looking for an excuse to emotionally abuse Hermione by basically begging her not to "make him hit her" and Hermione now has such a "sub" mentality that she lets him get away with it. If I were her I would promptly offer to leave him to it then. It's obvious that Severus gave no shits whatsoever about Draco. If he did he wouldn't have left him to rot for all those years. Hermione had best never forget that if Severus can turn his back on his own godson, he will do the same to her without thinking twice about it. Strong ability to "love", eh?
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