Reviews for Twisted Affections
Guest chapter 7 . 4/30/2015
This is all very nice, but you need to do your research. When a human becomes a vampire, they have no more blood and their skin is indestructible. Also, a newborn would be very strong. Based on the lack of knowledge here, I don't think you ever read Twilight.
SilentAffections chapter 11 . 8/22/2014
Holy shit bro, I mean its very detailed and some of it I wasnt expecting xDD But with how you described Bella, and her gradual change over time I feel as if the poem accurately depicts her feelings. And just everything about her. It was good, as expected of you! And just keep doing you!
A2463 chapter 11 . 8/21/2014
Really love it! Please continue!

kind of heavy feeling in reading this chapter but its still good!
FabPezBerry78 chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
I love your fiction these super hot and exciting I am very very eager to read the next chapters is very soon so keep it up you do a great job :)
A2463 chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
Love it! Really love it! Please continue!
Sam chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
holy shit bro xDD Well OBVIOUSLY, Bella likes it, and with the whole candle wax and the hand, I can see someone is a total masochist. Damn bro xDD Keep writing?!
A2463 chapter 9 . 10/11/2013
Love it! Please continue! Really love it!
SilentAffections chapter 9 . 10/10/2013
Holy shiet bro, you brought Leah into the mix, and I wasn't expecting her to act like that! She was like omg, I can't even explain it xD Exciting? Hot ? Idk, dont quote me on that xD But this was steamy, and you should keep writing more, and keep making it as youre doing now. I really dont know, this chapter has obviously rendered me speechless, in a real good way xD
A2463 chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
Love it! Please continue!
SilentAffections chapter 8 . 9/27/2013
Dude, I read this chapter after So Lost, and I thought WOAH, THIS ISNT ANYTHING LIKE THE OTHER ONE, so I had to take a moment and collect my thoughts before reading, much like mentally preparing myself and then you brought Alice in! Alice! I'm the twilight fanatic who use to go up to the fans and be like "Screw Team Jacob and Edward its all about Team Alice." You could only imagine my amusement when you introduced her xDD Keep writing!
A2463 chapter 7 . 8/12/2013
love it! Really love it! Please continue!
McFinnagen chapter 7 . 8/11/2013
Dude I had to bite at my knuckle really really hard to get through this, it was so effing intense xDDD I was grinning so hard, thinking "oh damn what ow" xDDD I keep smiling just thinking about it oh my god im so weird xDD
A2463 chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
Love it! Please continue! Really love it!
McFinnagen chapter 6 . 7/16/2013
Holy shit! Oh dear lord Victoria's just getting more and more creative with the way she plays with her! I was biting at my hand, trying to keep myself from smiling (Don't ask ok) But Bella seems to be enjoying it now?! Kinda xD Omg I cant wait to see what more tricks she's hiding up her sleeve
McFinnagen chapter 5 . 7/14/2013
Holy shiiiiet, I was like omg. So much to say and I can't seem to get it into words. You had me on the edge of my seat, fighting back a smile (Yes, I smiled, don't ask I'm weird), biting at my hand waiting for what Victoria would do next. I could imagine EVERYTHING. Oh lord this was really good xD
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