Reviews for One Love, One Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Does anyone else remember this chapter being different/edited cause i read this fanfic years ago( and still do) and in this chapter ash sees drew and may about to kiss and runs to misty and they kiss with may seeing it. May running out to a departing drew in the rain and her slapping ash. If not then it’s probably just me thinking of another fanfic but i love this fanfic and applaud the author for making this and the sequel story to it. Job well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice reference to Edgar Allen Poe! |
![]() ![]() amazing |
![]() ![]() couldn't ash and may kiss during the "comfort hug"? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well the best thing here is the description of breakfast. I'm literally drooling right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a love square |
![]() ![]() Pikachu owes blazeiken so much money |
![]() ![]() Swag bro |
![]() ![]() ![]() Major props to Advance4ever! tho spend days of his/her time is amazing! especially 300,000 words! Can't wait to read the rest of this story! |
![]() ![]() 'Norman got up, closed his eyes and frowned. He then opened his eyes and hugged Ash.' *soghs* Every guys first trial of getting a girlfriend they have to confront the father and get their blasting can't blame the Norman though becuase if that was my daughter I would be a bit overprotective for her safety *looks at the little Ralts on my lap/chest* yep not until you're old enough little girl |
![]() ![]() I'm not gonna lie but I did read the sequel by accident but eh so I'm not going to spoil this story for those that not read this yet But other it is a goo...of *a shiny a normal Umbreon sit on my lap* REALY Nyxe and Elsa Nyx:Umbre Elsa: *XP* Glacé glaceon *rolls eyes * keep up with that sequel bye |
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![]() ![]() This is probably the best written story I have ever read, both on , or in real life. The story development, cheracter development, and ending especially was the best I have ever read. I even said to myself multiple times "damn, this guy writes amazing" in real life. Can't wait to read the Unova part! -Stefan aka Bravo_Luigi |
![]() ![]() Best story . Had my heart in my mouth when ash kissed misty. But it worked out inthe end |
![]() ![]() I'm happy that ash and May are finally a couple I never really liked drew to begin with I think he's a jerk and to much of a show off may and ash are one of my favorite couples ash makes a better boyfriend for may he knows how to treat her right I know he's dense but he dose have a side to him that knows how to treat a girl like may right and make her happy and keep her safe from danger |