Reviews for One Love, One Heart
Unnamed chapter 5 . 7/24
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Guest chapter 51 . 6/26
This is probably the best written story I have ever read, both on , or in real life. The story development, cheracter development, and ending especially was the best I have ever read. I even said to myself multiple times "damn, this guy writes amazing" in real life. Can't wait to read the Unova part!
-Stefan aka Bravo_Luigi
Guest chapter 51 . 6/4
Best story . Had my heart in my mouth when ash kissed misty. But it worked out inthe end
Scooby-Doo 150 chapter 1 . 5/18
I'm happy that ash and May are finally a couple I never really liked drew to begin with I think he's a jerk and to much of a show off may and ash are one of my favorite couples ash makes a better boyfriend for may he knows how to treat her right I know he's dense but he dose have a side to him that knows how to treat a girl like may right and make her happy and keep her safe from danger
Power ranger red chapter 1 . 5/18
This is one of the best advance shipping fanfics I ever read I'm glad u put ash with may I think they make a perfect couple I know may had a crush on drew in the anime but from what I saw I know may loves ash more especially all the times he's helped her mentored her comforted her and even saved her they are so much alike others might agree and disagree but I know ash loves may just as much as she loves him even if he is to dense to realize it but his actions speak for themselves I know there will be a day that she will reunite with ash they both Carrie a half ribbon with contains the memories and experiences that ash and May both shared together in hoenn and kanto as they say the distance makes the heart grow fonder ash and May will always will be my all time main favorite ( advance shipping) forever
jordanlink7856 chapter 1 . 4/15
I'm pretty sure there's more than one Darkrai and Latios in le pokeworld, oh well
Guest chapter 2 . 10/11/2015
More important why choose may as the girlfriend i mean she irratating to no end and coodinating sucks ass (my opinion) and i thought drew was a better match for her for me its like this mistyxbrock, drewxmay, dawnxpaul and finally irisxcilan all my opinion so what made you choose may
Bryce chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Why the fuck do people write about a 10 year old show for kids?
Sly balls chapter 51 . 8/7/2015
If it hadn't been for pikachu in the end with the necklace
I would have gone berzerk if Ash didn't give May the necklace
Sly balls chapter 9 . 7/30/2015
Lol their cabin is M12 A.K.A the Majestic 12 LOLOLOLOLOL
MCPO Primus 101 chapter 34 . 7/28/2015
"From here only ONE SHALL STAND, AND ONE SHALL FALL", you tricky little writer slipping that in there.
Ke1de0432 chapter 47 . 6/30/2015
This was an amazing story. im expecting the next to be as good as this one.
Dqn chapter 4 . 5/14/2015
Really Emrald, Ruby and Sapphire
Blastoys chapter 51 . 4/5/2015
Great Story! The grammatical errors were nonexistent early on but as the story went on they were few and far between. I almost teared up at the first wedding fantasy sequence. It made me want to get married someday. It felt real with how you described it and I could feel the emotions perfectly. You captured the moment in a superb fashion.

The battles were good but I feel like you need to stop having so many ties! Ugh I know you may love the characters and do not want to have favorites but it is okay for people to lose. I like how you had a lot of shippy moments in the fic. I am also thankful you had Ash survive. I read another long Advanceshippoing fic where Ash died in the end and I did not like it. He is one of my favorite characers and does not deserve to die without leaving an heir(he did in the previously mentioned fic) but did not get to see her be born and grow up. Also that fic did not have much shippiness in it.

Yours is way better and I look forward to the sequel.
Bulbreon chapter 15 . 3/27/2015
I have a good feeling that monster pokemon is a hydriegon considering Tracey's comment on the multi-head thing and Dragon like appearance along with the Dragon Pulse or Rage or whatever it was.
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