im still reading and not that far along but was wondering will ash be catching any new pokemon also will he get a legendary.. i have always been one who firmly believes he should have a legendary

Very touching chapter. Whens the next update?

I need a new chapter or i'm gonna' die! Please write one! XD

nice i love this story i can tell ya put alot of thought into it

Awwwwww! I now officially love this pairing! I'll be back to check on this story when you've updated it.

Rowan out!

I love this story! i cant wait to see the next chapters! :D AAMayL 3

My guess. Ho-oh is next on the list. Or Lugia. Either way things are going to get interesting.

Another solid chapter! Looking forward to seeing the next one!

I agree with you in regards to the chapter being a bit slow but I think that finally have Ash and May as a couple really makes up for that lol so I thought you did a great job.

Man I can't believe that there is only 5 chapters left, can't wait for the next one so update soon!

Cyclone20

Remember correct punctuation. Of the chapters I've read so far, I've noticed several comma errors, along with periods nort being where they are supposed to be. Don't get me wrong, the story is amazing, but I'd love to see your punctuation improve in later chapters. -

Happy endings. Sometimes they have to be earned.

Loved the ending few paragraphs, although I seen a few typos. apate was one. But other than that, keep up the great work with this great story.

It is about time these two kissed! Excellent chapter!

Interesting, I like how you kept Ash from dying, though this will be the third or fourth time (in this story's world) that's he's had a near death experience! Keep up the great work, and have you read the news on the site's front page yet?

Hahaha funny what you did there but anyway great job with the chapter, I really liked the battles and I like everyone else is probobly wondering who both of those guys are but anyway loved the chapter and update soon!

Cyclone20