Reviews for One Love, One Heart
Jakobi-wan785 chapter 27 . 4/3/2014
Tee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee!
miloticstar chapter 50 . 3/29/2014
cute. are dawn an paul gonna be in the seqeal
Jakobi-wan785 chapter 14 . 3/14/2014
May kissed Ash! La la la la la la!
Jakobi-wan785 chapter 13 . 3/14/2014
Reding these stories always sends my heart a-flutter, like a beutifly. LOL
Ryex chapter 40 . 3/13/2014
By the end of chapter 40, I had tears in my fricking eyes. Everything that you put into this chapter made me think about what I could have, but never will...
DoubleMango2020 chapter 51 . 3/1/2014
Great story by the way
PKMNmaster101 chapter 2 . 2/16/2014
Good so far but I'm curious does this story have any inspirations possibly by Pikamaster11's FanFictions May's Crush series?
DoubleMango2020 chapter 40 . 1/28/2014
i dont even like this chapter
Waterkid02 chapter 51 . 1/26/2014
DUDE! This was the best fan fiction that has ever been made! I love the advanced shipping in it, how Ash gave up his life to protect May, and a whole bunch of other things! Can't wait for the sequel!
Waterkid02 chapter 35 . 1/26/2014
Fantastic Work! I love how the story's going and I support it! Excellent work!
DoubleMango2020 chapter 37 . 1/21/2014
Woah that was close call May almost kissed Drew I like Advanceshipping and Pearlshipping
DoubleMango2020 chapter 19 . 1/21/2014
This story is Interssting
DoubleMango2020 chapter 9 . 1/20/2014
I bet I ash would say oh shit when he saw drew ehh
midnightrebellion86 chapter 40 . 1/20/2014
That was one hell of a chapter. Awesome.
StromLord654 chapter 2 . 1/16/2014
You're doing great so far! my first fanfic was so bad i didnt even post it. my first fanfic was so bad that when i showed it to my friends they thought it was a prank or something. you have great potential and i hope you reach it! good luck!
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