Reviews for One Love, One Heart |
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![]() ![]() Tee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee! |
![]() ![]() cute. are dawn an paul gonna be in the seqeal |
![]() ![]() May kissed Ash! La la la la la la! |
![]() ![]() Reding these stories always sends my heart a-flutter, like a beutifly. LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() By the end of chapter 40, I had tears in my fricking eyes. Everything that you put into this chapter made me think about what I could have, but never will... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far but I'm curious does this story have any inspirations possibly by Pikamaster11's FanFictions May's Crush series? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont even like this chapter |
![]() ![]() DUDE! This was the best fan fiction that has ever been made! I love the advanced shipping in it, how Ash gave up his life to protect May, and a whole bunch of other things! Can't wait for the sequel! |
![]() ![]() Fantastic Work! I love how the story's going and I support it! Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah that was close call May almost kissed Drew I like Advanceshipping and Pearlshipping |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is Interssting |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet I ash would say oh shit when he saw drew ehh |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one hell of a chapter. Awesome. |
![]() ![]() You're doing great so far! my first fanfic was so bad i didnt even post it. my first fanfic was so bad that when i showed it to my friends they thought it was a prank or something. you have great potential and i hope you reach it! good luck! |