|Reviews for In Pursuit Of Butterflies|
| nIGHTSrAVEN47 chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
It's been a while, and congratulations on completing your first year at university! (I saw on tumblr)
As for the chapter, I find it to be a very interesting turn. It seems like this story is heading towards an explosive end, and I can't wait! Your words are like poetry and I drink them in. Keep going!
| thepluot chapter 17 . 7/3/2012
Excellent cliffhanger ending! Seems like Blair's got her spirit back and Jenny's on her way to ruin. Maybe? One can hope, anyway. As always I can't wait to see how it all plays out!
| eckomoon chapter 17 . 6/30/2012
Love this story. Read it all today and can't wait for the next chapter. So beautiful and tragic. I hope that Chuck can get divorced from Jenny for real now. I love your writing style so much. I've become addicted to your stories.
| alissa-jackie chapter 17 . 6/28/2012
I loved this chapter & I love this story. I'm happy that you started writing again! I loved that Blair confessed her love for Chuck to Nate and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
| A chapter 17 . 6/27/2012
Ahhhhhh so happy you've updated! Fantastic.
| chuckandblair chapter 17 . 6/26/2012
So happy that you posted! Think this chapter sums up Blair perfectly. It showed her desire to be free fighting with society's ideology of perfection. Please keep posting! Can't wait to see how this ends! :)
| Meg chapter 17 . 6/26/2012
This chapter was very good. What people today forget, was that women had very few rights back then, if any at all to be honest and Blair should not be chastised for following her heart. I'm sure she's been chastising herself for a very long time. The word slut, like you said, has many connotations and not all of them are bad. Back then, Blair would have been socially guillotined for becoming Chuck's mistress, but honestly, I'm glad you chose to let her make herself happy, in which her happiness happened to lie with Chuck. Can't wait to read your next chapter.
| 29cmk chapter 17 . 6/26/2012
I had to read this chapter three times just to try and make sense of my feelings and I still don't think I can articulate what it did to me. My breath was caught in my throat from the moment Blair sank to her knees - it was like being right there with her, and even though I knew he was coming to get her, to take her to her true home, it was still as beautiful as if had been unexpected. You killed it with this chapter and you just about killed me. Fanfiction is not supposed to do this to you; it's meant to be be the guilty little secret, it's not meant to make you feel this much. You need to write your novel, you need to get it published and you need to do it now. No pressure or anything...
| valentinosilkflowers chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
*takes shot because she feels somewhat entitled to one too*
Absolutely adore your writing style. The way you describe the heart...so beautiful.
And the way Chuck and Blair emotionally married was just brilliant. I adored that too.
You also make me love Ivy - maybe we'll see her crazy lying skills really, really, really come into play one day in this story? - and she's a wonderful character, fiercely loyal to Blair and sassy to the core.
Just a question, and it's a bit of a stupid one - Blair miscarried, right...? If she did, did she kill the baby or abandon it or did it happen naturally...? Or did it not happen at all, and she just thought she was pregnant but actually wasn't? That was my initial thought, but I'm a bit confused now.
Cheers to heathen baptisms in the Atlantic and air with the quality of corked champagne,
| odyjha chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
don't worry, I will not harass you, I'm just glad that you've updated and it was fabulous as always.
It's great that Blair and Chuck can finally be together! sort of.
| evieoh chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
I love so much that you have so perfectly and beautifully summed up why and what I love about both Nate/Blair and Chuck/Blair, and the different sides of their personalities that they bring out in each other.
"And one day, one day in one or a hundred years, he would call for her. She would leave Nate, leave their children, leave every trace of propriety behind and go to him. Who deserved that, a whore for a wife, a woman who could never entirely be his…but entirely was overstating the matter. She could never be his at all, not her skin, not her fat, not her flesh, not her bones. Her heart, with its many unhealed holes, was neither in Nate's nor in her possession."
Guh. You destroy me so eloquently.
| lulubelle2010 chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
How brilliant is this chapter! I'm so glad you're in holidays. It means you'll keep writing and makes me happy. This chapter, was perfect. I love how Blair just tells Nate that no matter what she's in love with Chuck, and how he comes to pick her up at the beach. And their "wedding" sealed by ther vows... perfect! I just fear what Jenny might do now she knows that Blair spent her night with Chuck. But I have the feeling that, now, Blair and Chuck are strong and they're going to fight for each other. "Rotten to the core" there's no better description for Jenny.
Please update soon. I'm still here, waiting greedily for the next chapter.
| lovetvtoomuchxo chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
wow glade your exams are over...
firstly hope you did well...
and secondly hope you have a fabulous summer..
and last but not least...
cant wait to spend loads of time reading your stories and you update often,...
well this chapter had me confused as always... natefused... l was what have l missed a chapter or something...
wow she let down nate in a bad way,,,, felt sorry for him...
second did not see that part happen with chuck and blair was speechless,,,,
then jenny good luck to her get her out of the way but hope she is treated mean by the princes to keep her keen... or rode wet and put away(stufff that one up)
now the story is going to get interesting...
where to with this ...
do we get them sneeking around or full on out in the open
cant wait for more ...
so know summer is here no more excuses...
till next time...
| Nikki999 chapter 17 . 6/24/2012
I feel like I say this practically every chapter but this is my favorite chapter yet. I'm soooo happy Chuck & Blair seem to have come to their senses & I always loved the Damien/Jenny pairin. As for Nate I wish I could feel sorry for him but I'm hopin Lola/Ivy will lend a shoulder to cry on
| ErinSmith20 chapter 17 . 6/24/2012
I loved that Chuck and Blair are together now and "married"! Yay! I can't even begin to guess what Jenny is going to do next but I hope she gets taken down ASAP! Please update again soon!