Reviews for In Pursuit Of Butterflies
madetobemrsbass chapter 22 . 1/5/2013
Loved it! Ah historical fanfiction is my secret love and no one does it better than you :)
Chuck kissing Asher was surprisingly hot wow I need more bisexual Chuck, but ignore me, that's just my pervy side coming out!
bethswanson725 chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
Just finished chapter 3 and all I can say is wow. I didn't think a fan fiction could give me these emotions. My heart literally breaks for both Chuck and Blair. I have this empty feeling in my stomach because they're not together. I'm excited to keep reading and pray that they get the happy ending they deserve.
seraphicbeauty chapter 22 . 11/11/2012
It was a delight finishing this story. The way you have presented the characters, settings and plot is flawless. I honestly can't find any words to describe how much I've enjoyed this journey. This isn't a review but I just wanted to let you know that this was a job well done. Bravo!
L chapter 22 . 10/24/2012
thank you for writing such a wonderful brilliant amazing story. :)
THEPrincessx chapter 22 . 10/23/2012
This was a lovely ending! Ha screw Jenny! Your writing is really good, good job. THEPrincessx too lazy to log in
THEPrincessx chapter 14 . 10/21/2012
Lol I gotta give u props for this chapter! Tht was such a good burn!
notoutforawalk chapter 22 . 10/11/2012
Within. Hee! Oh, Dan. Always writing about people you know. Nice ot know they had their happily ever after!

I must confess that I'm glad I waited. Otherwise my whining would have been even more pronounced than it already was! I know you're on hiatus at the moment, but I look forward to reading the next one when you are refreshed.
notoutforawalk chapter 20 . 10/11/2012
Ha! Go, Ivy!
notoutforawalk chapter 19 . 10/11/2012
Yeah. Better than the little wench deserved, but at least she's gone.
notoutforawalk chapter 18 . 10/11/2012
I'm so glad Blair called him on being the decider. He either needs to quit with the Angel behavior or leave her alone. I'm digging the idea of her as a pirate.
notoutforawalk chapter 17 . 10/11/2012
Comment on your note: It's funny to read this chapter and think about the differences between our times. We still have so far to go, but I think I know a very minimum of girls who would have been "good girls" if all our worth were still in our hymens. It's actually a bit uplifting to think that we have made progress, when some days we haven't made any.

As for the chapter, I find it hilarious that Jenny is out all night with the ambassador, but takes issue with Chuck's whereabouts. I find it beyond ridiculous for Jenny to have ever thought this was going to end well.

Interesting that Blair couldn't go through with it in terms of Nate. I honestly thought she would. Show Blair has shown herself capable of doing absolutely idiotic things when she's pissed off or frustrated in the romance department.

I do worry that Jenny is going to make things...awkward again.
notoutforawalk chapter 16 . 10/11/2012
"I told you you don't belong to this time, but I'm not certain if you even belong to one woman; there's far too much of you for one body to hold, too many conflicting morals for one person, and far too many strange games to be played with fans and bicycles and flaming ice cream.""
Nice. Blair does have about 85 personalities being suppressed by the time and society.

I like NB as friends, but I suspect I'm going to like the next chapte even less than I like Dan pretending he gets any say with Blair because he lucked into marrying S. Heh.
notoutforawalk chapter 14 . 10/11/2012
Is it wrong that I know Jenny isn't going to die, but I continue to hope she chokes on her mantilla?

Also, Chuck is still an idiot.
notoutforawalk chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
I have started over and my frustration with Chuck is already high. I can't stand dudes who think they get to be the great decider of the relationship. I do like Asher. I'm sad for him he was born too early.
29cmk chapter 22 . 10/6/2012
Thank you. That's all I have to say. I know that you're a writer and you would write even if no-one read it, but thank you for sharing this. I've enjoyed this story more than anything I've ever read on FF. It's been a blast!
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