Reviews for Paper Flower
Dave chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
my my someone is using the hearse song from alvin shwartz... impressive
LunaEvenstar chapter 15 . 5/29/2012
All I can say is...WOW. I thought she had been through hell by Chapter 13, but it got even worse before it got better! Your writing style is still hauntingly beautiful. This is one of the best genre fics I have read.
Speedykitten1643 chapter 15 . 5/20/2012
lol I see and I love this story. I've read the books but I never dreamt there will be some fanfiction romance like stories of Slappy. If he wasn't evil in the books I would probably had thought of a story for him long ago. I love this and I hope you are going to continue it. I can wait to see what you next chapter will bring or how Slappy will react when he and Carrie are finally alone. I also wonder what Richard will do since he had that glimmer of annoyance in his eyes when he saw Carrie grab Slappy and carry him with her like she use to. Update this tory again real soon please.
Mickey Loyal chapter 15 . 5/18/2012
That was the most happily emotional thing I ever read! I really wanted to cry out for joy that Carrie and Slappy are back to together again :D
Aerial dancer chapter 15 . 5/13/2012
i love this it's so good cant wait for the next chapter
SideshowJazz1 chapter 15 . 5/7/2012
OMG you did fool me! I thought for sure that Slappy had burned, but then, you're right, he lives forever. Thank you SO much for updating, and update again soon!

Also, check out my Slappy/OC story. It's very dark, but it's my most popular fanfiction!
SideshowJazz1 chapter 14 . 3/15/2012
Is that really the end? OK, this review is going to be pretty long. Be warned!

Slappy is one of my favourite "Goosebumps" villains, and I only clicked on this to see him. You did a very interesting portrayal of him: Still dark-minded and evil, but also protective. Carrie was a every interesting character. She was a believeable character because of her naivety mixed with her maturity. Her relationship with Slappy appears obsessive and unhealthy, but I can understand why.

Onto other characters. Rhonda was quite interesting. I was glad to see her become friends with Carrie. Rose Hall and the people in it was a bit stereotyped in the typical orphanage with tough mean kids with one leader, but it really worked. I still don't really understand why Carrie misunderstood Mr Grammel with Rhonda until it nearly happened to her, though. I was glad to see Julia die.

I think the most likeable characters were the asylum kids. I especially liked Cleo and Kevin Harvey.

This story was one I found very dark. It seemed as if Carrie didn't really have anyone she could turn to forever after she lost Slappy. But the darkness was actually good. I think this could make a really good artistic film, like with narration.

I have only one complaint with this story. It's a little bit confusing at times, I'm not sure why.

Overall, this is a fantastic dark story, and I really hope to see more of this kind of writing in future.
Tj chapter 14 . 3/8/2012
Please continue !
Guest chapter 14 . 2/27/2012
Loved , loved, Loved it! I literacy stayed up until 12:48 last night just to read this cause I couldn't put it down! Though I really wanted them to consummate there marriage. This story is great please continue! I'll be looking forward to it!
midnighrunner chapter 14 . 2/16/2012
I found this be really enjoyable. So much, in fact, that once I started I had to stay and finish the whole thing in one sitting.

You have some truly beautiful imagery in this: "It is magical to escape from the other children, to drown in the black coldness and become a mermaid of the dreaming sea." "I sang him lullabies of blossoms growing in the attic and dripping down through the ceiling, filling the entire manor with soil and petals and flowery perfume." Just two of my favorites from the many examples I could point out. :)

Well done.
9aza chapter 14 . 2/12/2012
Wow. Every time something good happens to Carrie, it's messed up or taken away. You continue to make me feel bad for her. I hope you update soon.
LunaEvenstar chapter 13 . 2/7/2012
Please don't let this be the ending! Carrie has been through hell and she deserves to be happy!

You are an excellent writer. I will say, there were some times when you should have put in a period to begin a new sentence rather than separating several clauses with commas. Your language style and voice, however, were outstanding. You managed to make me root for Slappy, who, as I recall, was a pretty detestable character in NOTLD. Congratulations on this story!
Jodiexxx chapter 13 . 1/16/2012
Oh no! I feel awful for Carrie! D: They electrocuted her? I can't believe it...so many months of association with them and then they're gone just like that. D:

So I began to deny his existence, although I dreamed of him every night, and the shock treatments grew less and less intense, my blistered mind bloomed white as a flower once more, no longer drowned in the harming fire.

that's so sad. D:

But dang, Carrie's smart! I would totally do that too. :D But I'd have done that earlier, so I could get out. XD

This is another wonderful chapter. I wonder what's going to happen next. :3

-ML
9aza chapter 13 . 1/10/2012
This is such a twisted and sad story, and I love every word of it. My heart truly goes out to Carrie and how she seems to lose everyone she becomes close to is quite upsetting. I'm looking forward to reading more of your excellent story.
Weirdawesomechick chapter 13 . 1/10/2012
KEEP IT COMING! please... Thank you :)
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