|Reviews for Paper Flower|
| 9aza chapter 14 . 2/12/2012
Wow. Every time something good happens to Carrie, it's messed up or taken away. You continue to make me feel bad for her. I hope you update soon.
| LunaEvenstar chapter 13 . 2/7/2012
Please don't let this be the ending! Carrie has been through hell and she deserves to be happy!
You are an excellent writer. I will say, there were some times when you should have put in a period to begin a new sentence rather than separating several clauses with commas. Your language style and voice, however, were outstanding. You managed to make me root for Slappy, who, as I recall, was a pretty detestable character in NOTLD. Congratulations on this story!
| Jodiexxx chapter 13 . 1/16/2012
Oh no! I feel awful for Carrie! D: They electrocuted her? I can't believe it...so many months of association with them and then they're gone just like that. D:
So I began to deny his existence, although I dreamed of him every night, and the shock treatments grew less and less intense, my blistered mind bloomed white as a flower once more, no longer drowned in the harming fire.
that's so sad. D:
But dang, Carrie's smart! I would totally do that too. :D But I'd have done that earlier, so I could get out. XD
This is another wonderful chapter. I wonder what's going to happen next. :3
| 9aza chapter 13 . 1/10/2012
This is such a twisted and sad story, and I love every word of it. My heart truly goes out to Carrie and how she seems to lose everyone she becomes close to is quite upsetting. I'm looking forward to reading more of your excellent story.
| Weirdawesomechick chapter 13 . 1/10/2012
KEEP IT COMING! please... Thank you :)
| Jodiexxx chapter 12 . 1/10/2012
Eek! Cleo's anorexic, and creepily so! I'm totally grossed out by her. CALORIES DON'T SEEP INTO OUR PORES! D: Otherwise, I like that she's being nice to Carrie. Mama seems nice, but if she says that Slappy isn't alive while Slappy is in her presence...I shudder to think what would happen to her. ._.
I feel happy for Carrie in this chapter. :D They're all kind of quirky, but I strangely like these new characters. XD
Also, because I couldn't resist this one: CLEO, Y U SO SCARY?
Anyway, great chapter. Thank you for updating! I totally look forward to the next one!
| F U C K E R chapter 11 . 12/24/2011
This story is FAR from being awesome
Its VERY VERY far from amazing to
Cause its BEYOND AWESOME THAT WORDS CANT DESCRIBE IT PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE UPDATE SOON
| inualician chapter 9 . 12/19/2011
That sorry excuse for a man, POOR RHONDA! But absolutely love this story I think carrie is so cuet :D plzzzz carry on.
| InsaniumArtisan chapter 11 . 12/2/2011
Woo! Even though, she's like, 12...or something! I hope they do end up together! When she's older! This story is great, and I hope it continues!
| Jodiexxx chapter 11 . 12/1/2011
This was a really fast update!
That special home...is it like a mental institution for kids? I like Cleo; she sounds nice enough! You've made me really curious by including that line about the second floor. I wonder what's on it?
...no, wait. Maybe I don't like Cleo anymore. "I thought diamonds were stuck all over her, but realized it was only her bones cutting through the dry yellow skin." How gross is that? D: What's more, she was happy that Carrie felt sad by it. -_-
Fascination with male parts? I suspect that Alex is gay. And I love gay (but not flamboyant) characters. :B
I wish Slappy was there, too. D:
Anyway, thank you for this update!
| InsaniumArtisan chapter 10 . 12/1/2011
Is this the last chapter?
Wow...emotional. If it's not, I hope Slappy comes back, in some sort of epilogue! (Hint. Hint. XD)
Amazing story over all, even if Carrie went anorexic at the end! (I'm joking!)
| idontcare13579Notld chapter 10 . 12/1/2011
Please Please Please Please Pleaseeeeeeeeee Dont tell me he is dead! you HAVE to continue writing this! like make him magically reapear and that the crazy old hag THOUGHT she killed him... :( i almost cried reading the ending... Please PLEASSSSSEEEEE dont stop writing after this.. because it looks like your trying to end it. :'(
Oh PLEASE dont let him be dead. if you let him live I'll DO ANYTHING (sorry if i sound desprate... ) But this is one of the BEST things i've ever read on FanFiction... and you kill him :( I like ligit made this accont to ask you to go on and make him live :\ awkward... i know. But Please! I BEG OF YOU! kind...twisted... person! please :( for the fans? u prob dont care... but im asking anyways! I'll never ask you of ANYTHING EVER AGAIN! Please let the old hag suffer... And if you dont like ppl ruining your writing genuosness... then sorry for asking, but if you dont care... PLEASE!
| Jodiexxx chapter 10 . 11/30/2011
OMG. SLAPPY IS RUINED? D: Is this...the end? Seeing as you haven't put this as complete I doubt that it is. But anyway, I'd like to see how you continue this. Oh god, I hate Madam Louisa!
| Jodiexxx chapter 9 . 11/29/2011
So Slappy likes Richard once more! I feel pretty happy that Julia's gone, actually. Does that make me evil? D: I like Richard and Vanessa. YIPPEE YAY! :D And Slappy, don't be such a perv! Carrie's too young! Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. Thank you very much for updating so quickly!
| InsaniumArtisan chapter 8 . 11/29/2011
YAY! THE PEDO IS DEAD!
SLAPPY HAS A NEW BRIDEEEE!