Reviews for Paper Flower
Jodiexxx chapter 12 . 1/10/2012
Eek! Cleo's anorexic, and creepily so! I'm totally grossed out by her. CALORIES DON'T SEEP INTO OUR PORES! D: Otherwise, I like that she's being nice to Carrie. Mama seems nice, but if she says that Slappy isn't alive while Slappy is in her presence...I shudder to think what would happen to her. ._.

I feel happy for Carrie in this chapter. :D They're all kind of quirky, but I strangely like these new characters. XD

Also, because I couldn't resist this one: CLEO, Y U SO SCARY?

Anyway, great chapter. Thank you for updating! I totally look forward to the next one!

-ML
F U C K E R chapter 11 . 12/24/2011
This story is FAR from being awesome

Its VERY VERY far from amazing to

Cause its BEYOND AWESOME THAT WORDS CANT DESCRIBE IT PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE UPDATE SOON
inualician chapter 9 . 12/19/2011
That sorry excuse for a man, POOR RHONDA! But absolutely love this story I think carrie is so cuet :D plzzzz carry on.
Imagined-Ink chapter 11 . 12/2/2011
Woo! Even though, she's like, 12...or something! I hope they do end up together! When she's older! This story is great, and I hope it continues!
Jodiexxx chapter 11 . 12/1/2011
This was a really fast update!

That special home...is it like a mental institution for kids? I like Cleo; she sounds nice enough! You've made me really curious by including that line about the second floor. I wonder what's on it?

...no, wait. Maybe I don't like Cleo anymore. "I thought diamonds were stuck all over her, but realized it was only her bones cutting through the dry yellow skin." How gross is that? D: What's more, she was happy that Carrie felt sad by it. -_-

Fascination with male parts? I suspect that Alex is gay. And I love gay (but not flamboyant) characters. :B

I wish Slappy was there, too. D:

Anyway, thank you for this update!

-ML
Imagined-Ink chapter 10 . 12/1/2011
Is this the last chapter?

Wow...emotional. If it's not, I hope Slappy comes back, in some sort of epilogue! (Hint. Hint. XD)

Amazing story over all, even if Carrie went anorexic at the end! (I'm joking!)

~teiaramogami
idontcare13579Notld chapter 10 . 12/1/2011
Please Please Please Please Pleaseeeeeeeeee Dont tell me he is dead! you HAVE to continue writing this! like make him magically reapear and that the crazy old hag THOUGHT she killed him... :( i almost cried reading the ending... Please PLEASSSSSEEEEE dont stop writing after this.. because it looks like your trying to end it. :'(

Oh PLEASE dont let him be dead. if you let him live I'll DO ANYTHING (sorry if i sound desprate... ) But this is one of the BEST things i've ever read on FanFiction... and you kill him :( I like ligit made this accont to ask you to go on and make him live :\ awkward... i know. But Please! I BEG OF YOU! kind...twisted... person! please :( for the fans? u prob dont care... but im asking anyways! I'll never ask you of ANYTHING EVER AGAIN! Please let the old hag suffer... And if you dont like ppl ruining your writing genuosness... then sorry for asking, but if you dont care... PLEASE!
Jodiexxx chapter 10 . 11/30/2011
OMG. SLAPPY IS RUINED? D: Is this...the end? Seeing as you haven't put this as complete I doubt that it is. But anyway, I'd like to see how you continue this. Oh god, I hate Madam Louisa!
Jodiexxx chapter 9 . 11/29/2011
So Slappy likes Richard once more! I feel pretty happy that Julia's gone, actually. Does that make me evil? D: I like Richard and Vanessa. YIPPEE YAY! :D And Slappy, don't be such a perv! Carrie's too young! Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. Thank you very much for updating so quickly!
Imagined-Ink chapter 8 . 11/29/2011
YAY! THE PEDO IS DEAD!

SLAPPY HAS A NEW BRIDEEEE~!

WHOOOOOOOT!
Jodiexxx chapter 8 . 11/28/2011
Slappy...killed...Grammel.

...Doesn't that mean Carrie would have to carry the burden of the crime once his body was found? Not that I'm not happy he's dead since he did that to Rhonda. But still. That's all that's worrying me now. Poor Rhonda, I hope she and Carrie can be friends once more. That is, if they ever were.

On another note, I'm pleased that Slappy came to her rescue like a knight in shining armor. 8)

Yay! I'm so glad you updated(: Thank you very much!

-ML
MR.E chapter 7 . 11/25/2011
just wondering,you think you can bring slappy to lifeunder a full moon when she and him are alone in an abandoned house or sonething,under a full moon,and have them do...stuff?just wondering for your next update,of coarse!
Imagined-Ink chapter 7 . 11/18/2011
Wow...ok.

Still awesome!
Jodiexxx chapter 7 . 11/17/2011
Wow. Intense. Uhhh...IS SLAPPY LUSTING AFTER CARRIE? But he's a dummy! But okay, I'm totally psyched for the next chapter now. And Madame Louisa is awful, as usual. I really like Richard and Vanessa - I hope they get to adopt Carrie! :D

OMG. Grammel you jackass. He was raping Rhonda, wasn't he? :/ God, I felt kind of sick reading that part. I was so disgusted by him.

Anyway, I hope you'll update soon! :D

-ML.
Mickey Loyal chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
My God,I wish to take Carrie and Slappy so I can get them away from that awful hell hole!
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