Reviews for Improvements
Amilyn chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Awww...this is lovely. I like her interest in and praise of his running time and improvement. It's a dramatic difference in just three weeks!
NCIS fan chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is a good story, yes? Lol yes indeed it was, I can actaully this happening. Great Job! -)
DaniSJ chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Loved it :)
I. M. Frelling-Wonko chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
BritMum chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I sense more chapters. It was goo but had a lovely ending setting up at least a couple more chapters! Pretty please?
apedarling chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
loved it, so cute
Spicy Tuna Fish Chopper chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Aw, I love their chemistry, here and in the series. They need to get together!
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Very cute. Nice job
1Styx and Stones1 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I swear, I get my high off this kind of fluffy Tiva friendship... I love the way Tony and Ziva lapse between awkward hesitance and easy familiarity. Undertones were lovely.

Thanks for sharing!
diana teo chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Liked how you kept it real with the swearing,lol!

Lovely scene,and moment... :)
LN8866 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Loved Tonys use of the f-bomb...made me laugh! Loved the fact tony had to process his mission before he went forward with ziva!
inako chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
delicious story! (is that even the word to describe it? anyway, enjoyed it very much :D)
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
The ending certainly makes me think there are more chapters to this story.


I enjoyed it!

The fact that Tony called her and she came "running" was really indicative of how much they depend on each other.
MegpieLovesTiva chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Avrice the Demigod chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
My friends and I have a saying, "In times when the blondest of mistakes are made it is best to call home and repetitivly say,

'Fuckity Fuckity Fuck' until some one picks up the phone".

lol great chapter, LOVE how you write tony/ziva.
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