Poor Bella. But at least she can start somewhat anew at London... poor Angela!
But, I think Bella will take refuge in Esme ..

Very clever. I like.

Wow. What will they say.
Tic Toc!

Looks intriguing. Love something a little different.

I need a cigarette, a joint, glass of wine, shot of whiskey, and a Xanax!
Jesus...
Well written! Greatly written of a first time and a passionate throe! I am flabbergasted!

Fan, water! Quickly, fetch my smelling salts and the Bourbon...
Jesus, Mary, and Joseph!
In seizing, I'm such a wanton harlot when it comes to Master Domward!
What a pantaloon dropper!

"I think I've just cum." - to quote the hilarious rave haired, comedic woman from The Wedding Date!
I'm fetching the defibrilator andalbuterol right NOW!

OK. So I've been reading this odd yet entertaining story for 19 chapters now, resisting the draw to review... but you finally got me. The very clever way you're shadowing the original story is really fun. You keep catching me off guard with the retelling of the major plot points and I have to kick myself for not recognizing them sooner. It's really well done so far. Must read more...

Lord Domward has my blood boiling with lust, anticipation and pure naughtiness!
Please, take me behind the stables, now please!
Great, wonderful novella here!

I am going to jump up and down, and pirrouette! I am just stupored by this story, and Edward's feelings for Bella, and his refusal to let her go!
Love this Regency Domward!

OMG! I will definitely include you in my prayers and I wish you the best and hope everything will come out bright in the end. Just make sure to think positive and have as many loving people surround you as possible. My mother in law had cancer ten yrs ago and was given six months life left, so far with our love and help she will continue doing well, her cancer has been in remision. With the help of family and friends you will be able to over come your battles, your in our prayers, so get well soon. Even though I am saddened that this amazing story will be taken down today, I do understand and hope to buy your version of the book so please keep us updated. Also, when going through rough patches in your life its important to continue to do what you love the most, so don't give up. I wish you all the luck in the world. Thank you and Get well soon! God Bless...'-)Narcy

I'm just shocked and in awe!

Absolutely BRILLIANT! I just read your story and just couldn't stop until the end. I want to tell you that this is the most amazing story I have read. The trial and tribulations that Bella and Edward went through had me on my toes. I lost several nails while reading and several boxes of tissue along the way, due to heartbreak or happiness. Your an amazing writer. I am honored that you gave us the opportunity to read your story and gave us a glimpse of the past, LOVED IT! I can't tell you enough how greatful I am that you shared this brilliant story with us. I am extremely saddened that it ended, but then again all good things must come to an end. I will definitely be rereading this amazing story over and over for it has become one of my top favorite. Again thank you for sharing this wonderful story and contratulations of your success in writing. I would love to read a book you've writing in the future since I read that you will soon be published, please keep us informed on your latest books and accomplishments. I can't wait to read more of your writing and if you feel you can do a sequal on this story, I would most definitely read it. YOU ROCK! I was blown away by the story, from the beginning to the end. Til next time...Narcy ;-)

I am in a stupor!
Jesus.
When they finally, *only kiss, I'm going to need a defibrilator!

Dear lord!
You've former sighing, gasping, and sounding like a true Harlot!
Wow!
Edward in shining armour on horseback!
Where is the nearest pile of hay that I can ravage him on - no matter whom sees!