While doesn't Charlie change his will and cut James out? That would take away the incentive of marrying Bella or of killing Charlie.

Yay! I'm so excited for this!

Sounds interesting please keep updating. Thanks

Obviously very different to Once Bitten but looking forward to seeing where you go with this one.

Looks like the start of an interesting story.

When I started reading I thought - oh no, another "ye olde English romp m'lady" but by the end if the chapter I was a whiny bitch "noooooooo - what happens next?". Love it - can't wait for more xxx

Wow, normally introductions are kind of boring and vague and ridiculously short; but I'm sooo captivated by yours. This story sounds amazing. I haven't actually read any of your previous work, but so far you sound extremely talented. I can't wait for your next update!

I enjoyed this chapter, a lot of potencial !

I'm really excited to read more of this!

Exciting beginning. Looking forward to see where you take this story. Thanks for sharing!

Can't wait to read more.

interesting... but when is this set? what time/year/century? sounds like around the end of the medieval period.