Reviews for Died in Your Arms Tonight
Yuli Ban chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Why do I enjoy such tragic tales?
Azelma4Ever chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Aww so sad. It reminded of Alittle Fall of Rain from Les Mis was that an inspiration?
account-isn't in-use chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Omg, this was SOOOOO TRAGIC... It was beautiful :'( In a way I can't describe.
Miss Witchie chapter 1 . 10/11/2011

Your writing is going from strength to strength. Where you could go from here is to develop your descriptions. For example when you write about 'hexes and jinxes' develop it by writing exactly what she screamed and describe exactly what Luna was doing/how she moved/what she weaved in and out of. This will let your readers see what you see when you are writing.

I hope you are well!