Reviews for A slice of heaven
MauiWowieHawaii chapter 18 . 6/11/2013
This is one of my favorite collections of akuroku.
ChibiGirlXD chapter 18 . 8/27/2012
Reaction: "Awwww *fangirl squeal*"
Brilliant chapter, though I almost yelled at Axel in the previous one XD
But this one was so cute... And Lol'ed so hard... So oblivious! XD
Neitzarr chapter 18 . 8/24/2012
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and then some.
Roku-Sarael chapter 18 . 8/24/2012
Adorible. :)
ChibiGirlXD chapter 16 . 8/8/2012
,O.O,
(I wish there was a good 'O.O-tears' smiley face...)
'Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ww!'
That was a brilliant chapter... TTTT
Normally, I hate short chapters/stories cause they don't last but the content definitely made up for it! :D:D:D
It was great, can't wait for more! .
TT
:'D
Roku-Sarael chapter 16 . 8/7/2012
Damn this itself should be a series! I like it! :3 ddd is amazing btw.
Veritable-Wasteland chapter 15 . 8/6/2012
Another beautifully written piece of fiction! Can't wait for the next one!
ChibiGirlXD chapter 15 . 8/3/2012
Awwwwwwwwwww cutest online-rl meeting ever... x3 x3 x3 x3 x3
And yaaaaay updates! :D:D:D
Loved this chapter the most, definitely! .
Too cute! XD XD XD

Brilliant job :D:D:D:D:D:D
SpiderlilyPrincipessa chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
I was eating sphagetti with chop sticks when I got to when axel saw roxas lets just say I failed to eat nothing but air and wood O/O
Veritable-Wasteland chapter 14 . 7/23/2012
I have to say, (though I'm sure I'm not the first to say this) but you are an amazing writer, your use of detail is amazing and I really like how you take the characters and give them your own spin that's true to their 'original' personality, but also goes beyond it. (If that makes sense.) 'Hoodies'is my favorite because you get so much about both of them with so few words and I loved that. Anyway, these one-shots are really good and I hope you continue them.
sea-salt kisses chapter 14 . 7/22/2012
alkdjzkncne! D: this one was really sad but really good akhskxkrne Maybe you could write a sequel where Roxas finally tells Axel and then sexy times ;D But I really liked the way you described Axel's disappointment and everything ahhajdjhsha Good work!
MauiWowieHawaii chapter 12 . 7/6/2012
I love this chapter! Axel is so cute. Haha.

In the chapter about Aerith and Sora, his dad was totally Cloud. Which makes sense because Cloud has the spiky hair and Aerith has the brown.
ChibiGirlXD chapter 12 . 7/4/2012
Awwwwwwwwww!
Cute... x3 x3 x3
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2012
BABIES. PRECIOUS BABIES
Guest chapter 11 . 7/2/2012
XD
It was a surprise to see that you've updated this :D
Nice story, humorous as always xD
It felt slightly different but that's probably because I haven't read your stories in a while XD
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D:D:D

Good luck and have fun! :D
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