|Reviews for Fulfilling Duties|
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/26
Awsome story! I just finished reading all of it and am so glad to see a sequel . You capture the characters perfectly and kept the story interesting every chapter.
| lotte.smit.7583 chapter 17 . 12/18/2014
this funeral idea had me sobbing, such a touching and beautiful thing with the circles.. God knows i hope it won't be for long, but this is the sort of funeral i would want for my loved ones.
| riskeybusiness chapter 21 . 12/4/2014
So glad there's a sequel! Love the first installment
| missmaddiej chapter 20 . 11/4/2014
And this is how we no not to trust Rita Skeeter
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/12/2014
I loved the last line!
| x-EmilyTennant-x chapter 21 . 11/1/2013
Brilliant! Off to read the sequel now... Love how in-character this was and the plot kept me totally hooked!
| astopperindeath chapter 13 . 9/4/2013
I've been really impressed by the evolution of your writing style since the first chapter. The first chapter hooked me, but you're writing has matured significantly. Good job! I'm loving this!
| violetmaid chapter 21 . 7/16/2013
I loved it.
| vampires-r-bloody-hot chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
| gypsykl79 chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
Wow, I would like to bask ...
| Have a snickers chapter 20 . 5/13/2013
This review is probably mainly about Truth, that ass! And he's stupid as well.
I REALLY got angry when you killed off Patty! Not with you, but with Truth! MY GOD, AND PEOPLE SPEAK ABOUT FICTIONAL CRUSHES ON CHARACTERS- WHAT I WANT TO DO TO TRUTH... omg! You are really a decent writer to elicit such a reaction from me! Truth you basturd! I Can live with him being a sadistic asshole (I kinda like that in fact) and things, but REALLY? You do not do what Truth did! IMO he can torture ANYONE as long as he wants, kill off several people but... Bruno... ;_; What he did there, it's unexcuseable. I want to ... I want to... dementor-kiss him. On the other hand, you did such an amazing job creating him as a villain, that one could ALMOST sympathize with him (seeing about the things with Lyla)... so he's really a round character, which is... surprising, considering that it's "only" a fanfic. More people should do that.
On a side note: Patty is right stupid though. (Why is it that the "victim" always threatens the bad guy in criminal shows, after they already know what he's capable of... Geez!)
| Have a snickers chapter 19 . 5/13/2013
I think I sniffled all throughout this chapter. I never ever liked Ginny, but damn, I love your Ginny. She's all balls, and no nonsense! I do like your Harry as well, although he is an asshat. Will you at some point come back to canon, naming his son after Snape, like... some time REALLY far away I mean? I'd really... I don't know if it would be just domestic and boring or what, but I think even if you wrote about tea water boiling it would be exciting, so... What I was thinking about is like a sequel to uhm, Finding Rhythm. (I know, it's not even done yet but... balls!)
Besides, I already am sad because after this chapter, I only have 2 more to read now. Bollocks.
So, well, Ron... kinda funny. He's all fainty, and things. Really can't make up my mind if I like your Ron or not..
| Have a snickers chapter 18 . 5/13/2013
As promised, here's what I am curious about! And that is the question if Snape is only staying with Hermione because of the child. While I don't think it is true, I wonder about what Hermione thinks. It's certainly one of the reasons that I never want kids (other than being egoistical and unwilling to share my partner with anyone, be it a kid or whatever). Can you like ever be sure if your partner stays with YOU, or just with the kid? (Has Hermione ever thought about that? Apologies if I overread that!)
Besides, I read the last smut thoroughly (I normally skip it) and I found that while it's smut, it's not offensive to the eye as so much other smut. There's a certain kind of subtelty, and it's not unrealistic (like most of the gay fiction, lolol) and while I can't say I'm head over heels with it, it's... alright, because it's natural. It doesn't take away from the real story. And also, as long as it's not a porny kind of smut (yes yes that is an imaginary line), and integrates well with the story (Which yours definitely does) it just serves to make the story more... real. All in all it contributes to the greatness of this fanfiction. It would be entirely unrealistic/bad NOT to have any of the intimate situations in it, unless you really want to go the way where "what goes on in the bedroom stays in the bedroom". I'd so much rather read/skip over the smut than not have it at all. )
Story's brilliant the way it is!
| Have a snickers chapter 17 . 5/13/2013
Pregnancy, more stuff.
Oh hey, the nightmare was actually quite interesting. At first I was like "WHAT THE FUCK" and I then I was like "oh shit, a nightmare"... heh.
Now the thing I really want to speak about is the funeral... Oh god. I QQ'd. Now I've been able to hold out at Lupin and Tonk's funeral, but there, well congratulations, you had me with Fred's. It's just so sad! It's totally right, with the celebration and things instead of mourning and that shits, and stuff, but... Oh god. He's dead ;_;.. I really have to congratulate you again, though hands champagne. I normally don't get emotional!
| Have a snickers chapter 16 . 5/13/2013
There was a looooot of talk, and lo and behold, it was not stilted. Very well done in fact.
I thought that the story was a bit slow-paced before, well not slow, but just right, you know? Realistically right. There is no hard romance from the beginning, where Hermione just accepts everything Snape says and throws herself at him, and things. It's really great that you've not done that, there's too many of that sort already.
Uh, the smut, oh well. Still not a fan, moving on..
Must read next chapter.