Reviews for He's a Keeper |
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![]() ![]() Aha! Meet the family,Al XD & Welcome a drunken night of confessions XD btw I Am Loving ds fic & I MEAN IT! (yup!when i say i love your story,i mean every word of it!) |
![]() ![]() Ah i was really waiting for them to meet & Art to come out...thank god it happened fast:-D &thanks Francis for helping our Artie with Al XD & i guess we all owe Matt big time for unintentionally setting my OTP up with each other XD (I mean,c'mon! hug-bet?lol!way to go mattie XD & don't worry i m sure they're gonna do much more than just hug XD) |
![]() ![]() Ds fic's just so realistic...based on absolute real life..i'm loving it:-) I'm also liking the USCan brohood & FrUk interaction,they're fun to read:-) |
![]() ![]() Ah i Love Al-centric chapters as much as Art-centric ones:-D yay! Al & angie broke up!i am so happy:-D btw did i ever tell u that ds plot rocks,the theme's realistic,your writing skills are amazing?! Not to mention the character portrayal of US & UK's awesum:-D |
![]() ![]() Ah damnation!ds is turning out to be more & more interesting...ds fic touches reality...ds is exactly what happens between long distance pen pals when one starts to get attracted to the other...brilliant work! |
![]() ![]() My God! Ds story's so promising & has a nice start:-D |
![]() ![]() I thougt it was a bit strange when Alfred was confused about the word "fizzy", but no one said anything in the last chapter when Alfred used the word "fries". |
![]() ![]() "Quiet a lovely little place Oliver has here" it should have "quite". "Quiet" means "With little or no sound". |
![]() ![]() Loving this story 3 But, you wrote "Alfred's smiled dropped immediately" it should be "smile". Sorry to be nitpicking (but you said you wanted me to). |
![]() ![]() Seems like a cool and interesting story, and I didn't spot any spelling errors (at least I don't think I did), but wouldn't Arthur use the word "trolley" instead of "gurney", because I thought "gurney" was used only in N. America. But I'm not British nor American so I'm not sure... I just wanted to point that out and tell you I liked this chapter and am going to keep reading your fic. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw man i thought i saw some prucan coming. Whatever it was a GREAT story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a serious F bomb...Alfred are you gay to? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, I read this fic a year ago and then I couldn't find it a few days ago and I might have cried a little bit but now I found it and I love you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, what a cute story! It was so addicting that every second of free time I got I HAD to continue readng it! And what a happy ending! One of the best stories I've EVER read! -Dubs |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good! I'm so sad it's over T_T |