Reviews for He's a Keeper
AngelRuby235 chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
Aha! Meet the family,Al XD & Welcome a drunken night of confessions XD btw I Am Loving ds fic & I MEAN IT! (yup!when i say i love your story,i mean every word of it!)
AngelRuby235 chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
Ah i was really waiting for them to meet & Art to come out...thank god it happened fast:-D &thanks Francis for helping our Artie with Al XD & i guess we all owe Matt big time for unintentionally setting my OTP up with each other XD (I mean,c'mon! hug-bet?lol!way to go mattie XD & don't worry i m sure they're gonna do much more than just hug XD)
AngelRuby235 chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
Ds fic's just so realistic...based on absolute real life..i'm loving it:-)
I'm also liking the USCan brohood & FrUk interaction,they're fun to read:-)
AngelRuby235 chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
Ah i Love Al-centric chapters as much as Art-centric ones:-D yay! Al & angie broke up!i am so happy:-D btw did i ever tell u that ds plot rocks,the theme's realistic,your writing skills are amazing?! Not to mention the character portrayal of US & UK's awesum:-D
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Ah damnation!ds is turning out to be more & more interesting...ds fic touches reality...ds is exactly what happens between long distance pen pals when one starts to get attracted to the other...brilliant work!
AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
My God! Ds story's so promising & has a nice start:-D
Guest chapter 13 . 7/28/2013
I thougt it was a bit strange when Alfred was confused about the word "fizzy", but no one said anything in the last chapter when Alfred used the word "fries".
Guest chapter 11 . 7/28/2013
"Quiet a lovely little place Oliver has here"
it should have "quite".
"Quiet" means "With little or no sound".
Guest chapter 11 . 7/28/2013
Loving this story 3
But, you wrote "Alfred's smiled dropped immediately" it should be "smile".
Sorry to be nitpicking (but you said you wanted me to).
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Seems like a cool and interesting story, and I didn't spot any spelling errors (at least I don't think I did), but wouldn't Arthur use the word "trolley" instead of "gurney", because I thought "gurney" was used only in N. America. But I'm not British nor American so I'm not sure... I just wanted to point that out and tell you I liked this chapter and am going to keep reading your fic. :)
AugstinHaddock chapter 21 . 7/25/2013
Aw man i thought i saw some prucan coming. Whatever it was a GREAT story!
AugstinHaddock chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
That was a serious F bomb...Alfred are you gay to?
MayaTheGreatish chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Omg, I read this fic a year ago and then I couldn't find it a few days ago and I might have cried a little bit but now I found it and I love you.
Dubpand1 chapter 21 . 7/18/2013
Aww, what a cute story! It was so addicting that every second of free time I got I HAD to continue readng it! And what a happy ending! One of the best stories I've EVER read!
-Dubs
swirlygirl123 chapter 21 . 7/15/2013
This was so good! I'm so sad it's over T_T
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