| Reviews for He's a Keeper |
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   TheHeroicAmerica chapter 21 . 7/13/2013 OHMYFOSH THIS IS THE BEST AND LONGEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ OMG OMG THIS IS JUST CUTE AND AMAZING AND OHMYGOD YESH! |
| thankchaosforspellcheck chapter 21 . 7/12/2013 Aww, so freaking sweet! This was adorable! Awesome story, keep on writing! |
| Faux chapter 6 . 6/30/2013 I have to say that I lovely everything about this chapter! From the reaction between the two in the beginning to how their relationship changed in the end, to the fact that Spain's sending spam emails (I can totally see him doing that) and Alfred has the best physics teacher in the WORLD. Great great job so far. I'm looking forward to finishing this soon, but in the mean time, wanted to share my favorite part with you: post/54281449934/hes-a-keeper |
| Beiowulf chapter 15 . 6/27/2013 Somehow I knew that would happen but at the same time I really hoped that it wouldn't... |
| Beiowulf chapter 11 . 6/26/2013 I. can't. even. GAAAAAH! I meant to save my review for the end but this is just too good to do so! I love it when you find diamonds likes this by accident! This is without a doubt one of the greatest fics I have read EVER. Normally with a multi-chapter story it either gets boring or repetitive or just too fluffy after a while, but I don't see any of this happening! Sometimes I can't bring myself to finish what was an originally good story but THIS. *squee* I must know the ending! I hope it's a happy one! Ahem...so, yeah. I salute you. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/11/2013 Brb crying |
| BlueDestruction615 chapter 21 . 5/28/2013 This girl here is speechless. You're a really incredible writer! I love the entire story, OMG this is the best fanfic I've ever read 3 and that part when Arthur was really drunk and told Alfred to swim all the way to England, I just- XD This is Prussia awesome! ლ( з )ლ (I always write in the last chapter xD sorry for any english mistake) |
| Arista chapter 21 . 5/6/2013 This is right up there with the other completed Usuk fanfics. 3 |
| Abigail chapter 3 . 4/29/2013 First off, I love this story! And I know it's completed and all and yadda yadda... However, I just have to vent a few things (helpful if you ever want another... Nebraska story?). Anyways, I live in Nebraska, and besides Lincoln (where I live) and Omaha, the rest really is country. In fact, everyone I know usually refer to our whole state as "the middle of nowhere". However, lots of the dialogue is very... Southern sounding. I've visited the small town my dad (and yes, Dad... Most don't call their parents Ma or Pa. I've never really been to the south, but I feel like that's a more southern thing, really) grew up in, and still no one has an accent. However, I loved how you described the small town vibe of everyone-knows-of-everyone-and-everything. It's sort of the air I get when ever my father talks about small-town (and technical village) life. Granted, I live in the more urban part of Nebraska, but Nebraskans don't "fix" to do something- you know? We don't really have any particular "ticks" of the language. However, I thought the comment on Nebraskan beef was funny! It's weird, because most people overlook Nebraska. And if anything, I feel like most people would call us con-heads... Anyways, to end this; you're writing is great! As is this story- I mean, after this reveiw, I'ma go back to reading. So, all my criticism was a "just-so-ya-know" sorta thing! |
| hetalia.lover.PruCan.4Evs chapter 21 . 4/27/2013 Nononononono! Make a sequel! |
| hetalia.lover.PruCan.4Evs chapter 20 . 4/27/2013 Hahaha no FrUk for you little Francey-Pants! You should have won him over before America did! |
| hetalia.lover.PruCan.4Evs chapter 18 . 4/27/2013 Yay! And the boys are together once again! That makes me so happy! |
| Arista chapter 16 . 4/22/2013 It says end of chapter fifteen when it's actually end of chapter sixteen |
| hetalia.lover.PruCan.4Evs chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 Awesome story! Just one thing, the time is 8 hours ahead there from here in the USA so when Artie woke up it was about 6 am there, so it would have been 10 pm in good old America but you said it was 1 am so, just wanted to point that out. I only know this because I have lived in Great Britian and America and have family in both areas so, yeah. But, awesome story! |
| Fujoshi-dono chapter 21 . 4/14/2013 UGH THIS WAS SO PERFECT. You characterized Alfred and Arthur so well! I love everything - from how they met, how they worked out their struggles and differences, how they became attracted, how they made love, how they end up together - CAN I JUST APPLAUSE YOU FOREVER?! I love this story from the bottom of my heart. I hope there's a sequel to this. I love the Frenchman and how Arthur calls him Frog HAHA I love their personalities. Great job - |