Reviews for He's a Keeper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow... I loved this! I cannot explain to you the plethora of emotions that moved like a torrent through me as I read each chapter. The extreme highs and depressing lows, and the times when there was so much tension that I physically had to move away from my iPod or laptop. Nor can I explain to you how much I bonded with these versions of my favorite characters, and how much I worried over them, wishing that all if their problems would just disappear. I also LOVE your writing style, the way it's through their eyes to really show the distinct characteristics of each of them. And the ending... I felt... I can't describe it; I just love how the ending finally made the title so clear. I really love that last line; it's genius! Excellent job - purely. Thank you ever so much for writing it. I hope you're writing more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() TTTT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ENDING! AND THE LAST LINE JUST...ugh beautiful! I love the touch of italyxgermany in the end. Ugh sad this story is over! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehehehe, I'm surprised Alfred knew the trem shag, probably got it from Aurthur, hehehehe Awww, poor Francis, i fell bad, is gunna be ok -huggles- |
![]() ![]() ![]() asdfghjkl;asdfghjjhgfdsasdfghjkjhgfdsa dfg MY FEELS! WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *O* His dad saw! I saw it coming but still...WAZ GUNNA HAPPEN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *nosebleed* I believe that that was hotter than a june bug in july *rich southern accent* |
![]() ![]() ![]() KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AA! The Reunion! KYAAAAA |
![]() ![]() ![]() -falls to knees and looks up at sky- NYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WHAT! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY *dramatic music as the camera pans out on my crying form* NO! Mergh, rated m huh? Hmmmmmmmm *nose bleed* |
![]() ![]() ![]() TTTT *sniff* *sniff* WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY!? *dramatic music* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahaha! Druken Arthur, i wanna see more of that! |
![]() ![]() This story was soooo cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an awesome story! (I just found it recently, and read it all in one go) I love the way you portrayed the two, and it was really fun and enjoyable to read! |
![]() ![]() I like this story, I like you style, I really do but the the more I read it just seems, I don't know, a little forced, maybe? The dialogue and such. In all honestly, I haven't encounters guys, lovers or otherwise, speak that way nor do I see the characters themselves speak that way. The tone and voice, maybe, just not what they're saying, if that makes any sense. And the editing seems to have been a little rushed, which I understand when you have people waiting for updates, but I found quite a few errors, which is a little frustrating when it started out so well, especially when it's Arthur talking or in his 'world'. I mean, it's great and all, I like this, but if you decide to maybe go revisit it one of these days, it's beginning to lack that something that I enjoyed in the beginning... |
![]() ![]() Careful Father Feli... I understand the whole follow you heart thing but please don't end up being a homewrecker... that'll be very bad to say the least . |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really great, just.. Wow :) I knew a cheesy line at the end was coming :)! |