Reviews for He's a Keeper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! It was sweet and sappy and sad all the same. I'm just glad that after all their struggles dealing with a long-distance relationship, they finally were able to move in together in America and have that happy ending they deserve. The final bit with Pastor Feliciano getting his own penpal, and Alfred's response was the perfect way to wrap up this story. Thank you for sharing this delightful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cute! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You don't know how hard I laughed when I read the drunken texts. o3o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before I read the rest of the chapter, I want to say I have absolutely no idea what it's like to live in a small town other than what my cousins from Ohio tell me, and thinking of being in a graduating class of 29 kids is just a strange thought. My class has 625ish kids, and my town, which is pretty big for a suburb, has about 50,000 people. Lichtenstein only has a population of 30,000. The idea of the principal teaching classes bewilders me (I didn't even know who my principal was until this year because our six assistant principals deal with the students). I just hit the part where Matt mentions that he's studying to become a psych nurse. So. Much. Respect. Being a nurse is tough. Being a nurse in a psych ward deserves a medal. Boozing in England, bromance, Francis, and Drunk!Alfred. Hell yeah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so excited to click the next chapter button, you have no idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D Loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have spent three days reading this (Would have taken less time- school) and I would like to say I don't regret it at all. It's so cute and... just... Indescribable! Every story has it's flaws of course, but it was well written too. Good job, ja. |
![]() ![]() Excalibur... That damn sword! God, I hate Excalibur in Soul Eater... "From the United Kingdom, I'm going to California...ExcaliburExcalibur" A bit ironic, huh? Great story anyways! |
![]() ![]() This is honestly amazing. I love how the title didn't come in 'til the final words, I loved how it was paced and I loved Al's accent. One thing I was wondering though- What happened to Francis? And Ludwig and Father Feli's relationship? I don't know if you write these characters but if you do it would be nice to see how the others turn out. Did I mention I love this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh I'm so happy for Feli! I loved the way you wrote this. Usually in fanfiction, everyone is with their respective pairs and everything goes swimmingly well. But in this, everything just felt so real. Some characters were in a relationship while most were not. Not everyone was homosexual. The loss or past loss of loved ones and regrets held for years made everything just so...amazing. I'm sorry. I can't come up with the right words to clearly express myself... And I loved the way you described the ranch and Alfreds daily routine of letting the cattle out and using a horse to bring them back in. Everything was so clear, I could imagine it despite only ever living in the city. Do/did you live in a rural area like that? When I started reading this story is should've known you were the one that wrote it. Your 'Pretense' was my first ever omegaverse fic and I've been hooked on that AU ever since. Pff I loved Excalibur. Something about him meowing in response to what people say like he was talking made me laugh. Anyway I loved this story and the last sentence XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I can't believe that it's over! DX This was just fantastic. I loved everything about it and I can't wait to see what muti-chapter fic you write next uwu. JAF |
![]() ![]() ![]() Johnnnnnnnnn DX poor John )': |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are so many things that are confusing me. Little things that Alfred says about his dad to Mattie and I'm already assuming that is mom passed away but I don't know for sure. Hopefully it will be answered soon! I love this story XD -JAF |
![]() ![]() *Hugs your legs* oMo You beautiful, amazing person, this was wonderful. *Clings* |
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