Reviews for He's a Keeper |
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![]() ![]() Alfred's "Pa" keep's sounding/ acting like Berwald (Sweden) in my head! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredible! You write this with such realism that I feel like I'm watching something that's actually happening. :D This also hits home as I understand how pen-pal friendships can become romantic. I can't wait to read more of this- you're an amazing writer! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I bet Elizabeta(HUNGARY) married Roderich(AUSTRIA). Now, I'm not hatin' on Roddy. Chances are that he didn't even know about them letters. However, I cannot find it within myself to forgive Elizabeta for what she did. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO POOR GILBERT!? Totally NOT awesome. :( Frig yes for Feliciano( ) finding happiness with his OTL Ludwig(DOITSU!). xDDDDDDD Was it me, or did Francis(FRANCE) have feelings for Angleterre?...I feel bad for him. :( BUT YAYS! LOTSA LOVE FOR THE UKUS-NESS AND VICE VERSA! xDDD Read the entire thing in one night. Couldn't stop reading, and now it's half past twelve at night and I haven't finished my homework or studied for my English test on the particularities of different scenes of Shakespeare's play Hamlet: The Prince of Denmark. FML but IDC! USUK/UKUS ALWAYS. Peace. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! That was such a corny ending, but it was PERFECT! I loved every second of that story and spent every waking moment reading it since I found it! Thank you for writing it! The only thing I was confused about (until I got an in-depth explanation by my dad) was how when they were in Nebraska, and the weather was described as horrid and "sub-zero". It got me wondering, "what is the average temperature in Nebraska in November/December?" I ended up torn between anger and laughter when I found it to be 36F! That's 0 C... But then I thought "snowstorm? Has to be below freezing". But still! The coldest is -10 C! We get -2535 C! I randomly burst out laughing and then perceeded to rant for a bit... Sorry about this rant, it's late... Buuuuuut anywoo, loved every second! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so sweet. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is alfred using a hackney bit? Because if he isn't then he runs the risk of his horse getting grass stuck on the bit and choking, and that would be sad... :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anzacspanfoqbziqsoabdowhsboe . This story made me cry laugh and smile I love it this story is perfect you are perfect and YAY FOR FATER FELI |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a prologue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was Heartwarming and wonderful! I enjoyed every word! Thank you for writing this it was amazing 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, I totally gushed over Arthur's letter when he said he received Alfred's by mistake...so adorable! It's totally believable to think that a long-distance relationship can blossom over a tiny (but oh-so-cute) mistake like that. Makes for some good story-telling. I love how this story started out! I'm off to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Ah...this story reminds me of just recently. I figured out that I'm at least bisexual (I'm a girl), and I think I'm more on the lesbian side of bisexuality. So anyways, during sixth grade I transferred to a different school that was small and had maybe thirty or so students per class. There were maybe nine girls in my class. But there was this one girl who had freckles, brown hair, brown eyes, and was extremely smart and was an actress for commercials. I think it grew over time, but I wanted to be around her. My heartbeat increased around her. It wasn't that much, but still. And then eventually I graduated from that school. Had an unsuccessful relationship with a guy. Then I discovered that I'm bisexual after a person asked me (he was bisexual) if I was a lesbian. He asked it in all sincerity, and eventually I questioned. I figured it out, but I hadn't remembered that girl yet. So eventually sophomore year of high school came around. I'm in public school, but nearly everyone else at that private school had gone to Orange Lutheran High School, which costs about thirteen thousand dollars a year. I went to go see a play there, and eventually at the end of the program I saw her name in the program as one of the main characters. (she was faking a New York accent during the show). I was in the hall of the school when she stepped out of the dividers that separated backstage and hall. I think I realized then that it was a crush I had always had on her. She didn't notice me (I had been extremely shy in middle school) and so I just watched her go by. She was so beautiful. And so loved. So outgoing. She seemed to be everything that I was not, which proved that opposites attract. Or at least I am attracted to opposites. I wondered if I had a chance, maybe that she could be a lesbian or bisexual too. I stalked her on Facebook, looking to see if she listed sexual preference. It wasn't listed, but I found pictures of her and another guy. No matter what, I can never be with her. Not only does the gender boundary exist, she is a Christian and goes to a different school. Anywho, just felt like ranting. Use it for a fanfic for USUK, I don't care... |
![]() ![]() One of the best stories I have read! You did a great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;-; Huu. I stayed up to finish reading this, even though I should be sleeping, but still twas so worth it. :') I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a beautiful ending! This story was amazing, one of a kind! It kept me going to the end, and I'm sad that its over! Keep writing! No matter what, never lose your passion for writing! |