Reviews for He's a Keeper |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a pretty good job of wrapping all of this up :) I feel so bad for poor Gilbert and also Francis for kind of being left behind, though... At least Ludwig and Feli get a second chance! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite USUK story on this site. Just so you know. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah, this chapter was intense! You did a good job of breaking the tension with humor, though :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had totally melted into a gooey puddle by the end of this chapter. It was just so freakin' adorable! X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally melted at the end of this chapter. It was so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOO! Not John! I like Scotland TT_TT This chapter made me cry so much... But at least the ending was happy and helped to kind of lighten the mood :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm totally going to name a cat Excalibur now :D Best. Name. Ever. But Alfred, why did you have to go? You finally made progress! D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter giggle fits xD And that ending was just too adorable :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! This story was so damn cute! X3 I ! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I love this chapter! So cute! And now it is two in the morning, so leaving off on that bit of fluff, I should go to bed. But fear not! I will continue reading tomorrow :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alfred's graduation ceremony sounded all too familiar to me...I'm from the South Dakota countryside, so I know what it's like to go to a small school in the middle of nowhere (I mean, seriously, our newspaper is called the Cornfield Chronicles b/c the school is literally in the middle of a cornfield xD) But YAY the meeting is coming up! And I want to see what Alfred does when he's drunk! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's about one in the morning right now, and I should really just take a shower and go to bed, but I can't because I'm totally GLUED to your story xD *clicks next chapter* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story looks to be promising :) And I know some people really hate the whole text/email lingo and format, but I personally love it. It just seems to give the story more character... On to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a nice ending! You really did a good job with tying up all the ends before you concluded. I almost thought that you could just stop it earlier in the chapter, but then I kept reading. Finishing with Feli's response from writing Ludwig, that was so special. I hadn't expected that to come back, and include the title as the ending line...good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Applause* You did a wonderful job and you deserve all the wonderful feedback. Thank you for writing such a wonderful fiction that made me laugh and cry. |