Reviews for Ash
Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
I love this! It's very well written. I love the part where you said that Lucifer lets him turn into ash before putting him back together again, and Sam likes being ash more than anything. I also like how Sam bargained to get out of the pain, but Lucifer offered him Adam because he knew Sam was too compassionate to do anything to him. He had him wrapped around his finger the whole time. A very chilling story! Fantastic work!
HappyBlushCalayapie chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Wow... this is good!
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
*dies*

I mean, like, really. I think I died, at least a little. This was just fantastic and it makes me feel like such a terrible person for saying this, but I loved the moments Sam had with the Lucifer hallucination. They were just so intensely enjoyable in a really, really morbid way. It might be because Sam never *really* talked about Hell with Dean like Dean did with Sam (briefly, yes, but still) so those moments were the only real glimpse we got into what Sam's Hell was like.

Anyway, this was wonderful (as if everything you write, apparently) and intense and really brilliantly written. I just find myself wanting to hug Sam and make it all better for him because it's just awful that he had to go through that at all. That *anyone* would have to go through Hell, honestly, because there really aren't very many human beings who truly deserve that level of torture (though I admit, there are certainly a few who do).

But anyway, my weird musing aside, this fit like a scene that I kind of would have loved to see in the show. Interesting and very well written! I loved it!
SecondStarToTheRight18 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
My God... this is... is... is... I haven't any words for what this is. It's terrifying and beautiful and you described Hell so compellingly. Like the pure torture that I'm sure it is. I was cringing and my skin was crawling particularly bad at this part: "The devil gathers bone fragments, slides muscle and veins and organs back into place, gives Sam back his eyes for the first time in what might have been twenty years..." That is brutal! I can't even... just. This really leaves an impact on the reader. It's just that you described everything in such a real way. I felt like I was *actually* in Sam's head with him. VERY good. :)
3DBABE1999 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I... LOVE ... THIS ... STORY! ... WANT ... MORE ... PLEASE! .. It's simply PERFECT ... (At least give a continuance or sequel (we didn't get NEARLY ENOUGH ... tortured Sam in Season 7 ... ALSO would you check out my story Sam's Hell? ... I think you'll like it ( and I loved to get your feedback on it because I like your take on his hell and I'm gonna do another Sam's Hell fic because I think with Cas and Dean away (sorry if you haven't seen the finale for Season 7 ) THAT ... Lucifer will once again come to play ... just a theory... I'm thinking that with Cas "Tripping The Rift" so to speak that the WAMMY he laid on Sammy (haha Wammy Sammy) will wear off and Sam will now be doing some "tripping" of his own (again a theory... and it doesn't hurt to play) and with no Dean (cuz he's "Tripping The Rift" to) to pull Sam out of it ... Well ... It could get MESSY and I feel bad for Dean when he gets back
lanternheart chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Ouch, almost raped by the devil. That's gonna take awhile to get used to.
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Very well written, but creepy and sad at the same time.
Jane88 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Wow, that really have me the creeps. Poor Sammy! Loved it, very well done!
Cainchan chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
ohh this story was really well written but also so sad. what Lucifer did to Sam is so terrible, he is truly the most devil thing on earth/in hell and heaven. I am glad you handle the whole sexual assault thing with such care. The most authors try to write that Sam enjoyed it to be raped by Lucifer that nearly make me want to puke all the time. hmm now that is canon that sammy was abused sexually by the devil himself with the hints Lucifer gave at the show, I waited for a story which deals with this delicate plot and your story definitly deals perfectly with it. hmmm while I read that I wanted to hug sammy all the time and I always wondered in the show when Sam was abused that way why let he someone touch him ever again and what would Dean do if he found out what Lucifer did to his little brother. thank you for sharing this story.
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Chilling but wonderful. Well done.
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Very good story. Poor Sam...
Thorny Hedge chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Poor Sammy. And poor fans. We were SO robbed. :/
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Horrifying and very good.
wandamarie chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
wow it was a good one chapter story thanks
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
*It worms into his head and Sam learnt long ago why the Bible depicted Satan as a snake.* Lovely creepy line as are so many others within this.

This is so beautifully painful and I just want to scoop Sam up and run . . . except he's way too big for me to carry anyway.
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