|Reviews for Theorem the Hippogriff|
| UbiquitousTime chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
First off, let me say I love the hippogriff's name. A lot.
Second, I think the story could have been the slightest bit deeper. But it's short, and short stories are hard to... deepify.
Overall, it was great and I'm looking forward to reading other stories of yours. And for you to join more challenges I may eventually put up.
| Love without expectation chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
thats a cute story :)
| wingswordsandmetaphors chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I think you could've given it a bit more depth, but that's hard to do in short fics so it's not a big deal. Also, I love the hippogriff's name :)