Reviews for Bruises
sammigirl986 chapter 16 . 5/24/2013
Wonderful as always, but was the commando thing for JM? I've heard that James goes commando sometimes... lol :P
sammigirl986 chapter 13 . 5/23/2013
Wow, I like how Joyce is just all okay with everything!
sammigirl986 chapter 6 . 5/22/2013
Giles and Joyce... That's good. I like the added input of Faith and Gunn too, their characters make sense with the story. Your writing is fantastic, the characters are so real!
sammigirl986 chapter 3 . 5/22/2013
Awww... Poor Spike and his mom!
sammigirl986 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
I love how the essence of each character is still there! I can't wait to start chapter 2 now!
RmsThakoer chapter 40 . 5/22/2013
I hope you're reading this, and i hope the support'll help your problem a bit, but since i've started reading this story, when you were at about chapter 28, i've been hooked and eagerly awaiting every next chapter. So i hope the next comes through soon, if you have the time.
Nathalie Joe chapter 40 . 4/15/2013
Oh wow! I've read this whole story in just 3days! It is awesome, full of emotions, and pain, and good moments too! You have the characters well in hands! I love it! Keep on going!
Forever-Furuba chapter 40 . 3/15/2013
It will be really interesting to see how Riley interacts with others under these new circumstances. I imagine he will be quite defensive with everyone, just as Spike was when the truth about James' treatment of him was revealed.

Dawn - being young, and fond of Spike, and probably sheltered from knowing the worst of what's happened to the foster kids her family takes in, and having already been mentioned as disliking Riley - will probably get angry and yell at him, leading to a big fight as Riley gets mad at her in turn and Buffy and Spike leap to Dawn's defence (while Joyce and Giles, if present, try to mediate), possibly resulting in physical violence and those martial arts lessons finally being used, but hopefully ending in something cathartic that will put everyone on the road to healing.

Will we see more of Riley and Graham's relationship? (Assuming they're still together, if they ever really were together beyond just sex.) What about Riley's interactions with Angel - they've already changed drastically in the past few weeks; how will they be further changed by this? I expect Gunn will start having a bigger role in this story in future chapters, being someone both Riley and Spike can relate to and might turn to for advice and guidance. (Again, making assumptions - in this case, that Riley's father's treatment of him didn't result in him being completely unable to trust adult men as authority figures.)

I look forward to seeing how the plot develops.
Spike is the BIG BAD chapter 40 . 3/14/2013
Sorry I missed reviewing on the last chapter. I love this story! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens with Riley. I can't believe Giles is letting him stay in the same house as Spike! I feel sorry for Riley and all, but I don't want him staying in a place where it would be easy for him to torment Spike. I see this heading one of two ways. Either Riley will be the evil guy who was ruined by his dad, or Spike will be helping him through this and it turns out that he's not totally ruined. Anywhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter! This is my favorite story on Fanfiction. :)
Guest chapter 40 . 2/15/2013
Please post soon, I love this story!
Zelda Gizzler chapter 40 . 2/6/2013
Please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon!

I love this story! I have a suggustionbig shocker there! :): maybe you could have Spike write songs about Buffy, and then Buffy discovers them, and has Spike sing them to her! I think "Good Night Sweet Girl" would work for this if you have him write it before the story. Oh! Or you could have Devon quit, and Spike could be the lead singer of Dingos Ate My Baby! Are you going to bring Anya in? 'Cause you have all of the other Scoobies paired up, but not Xander. "Smiles" would work too! For during the story, I mean, he writes it during the story. The only part that doesn't work is the "Damn, it's 2 A.M. again, she kisses me goodbye, for the 16th time.", 'cause they live in the same house and all... Besides who in their right mind would leave Spike at 2 A.M.? Anyway both of those songs are by James Marsters. So please update soon!

Zelda Gizzler

P.S. 5,000,000,000,000, points if you know where the name came from.

P.P.S. I apologise if someone has that name and is reading this, I am a guest, but I wanted a name to be at the top. :)
Guest chapter 23 . 2/6/2013
"Those aren't vampires, Buffy. Vampires aren't supposed to sparkleā€¦ duh, and real vampires burn up when they go out in the sun."

That's what I keep saying!

And Firefly! Yays!
alexiarrose chapter 40 . 1/22/2013
I'm not a wealth of ideas lately, but this one is close to my heart, so please keep plugging away at it. And thank you.
Litalove chapter 40 . 1/12/2013
I loved the update! Ohh Buffy and her temper. Can't wait to read more :))
Purple Apocalypse chapter 40 . 1/11/2013
I'm so, so glad that you've updated this amazing story. I'm very sorry that I haven't reviewed before this chapter; I'm really bad about reviewing, and I frequently don't review at all. Actually, I might have reviewed once before, probably under the name SSS if I wasn't signed in, I don't remember. But anyway, this story deserves some serious praise. I've read a few of your stories (not that you'd know: like I said, I'm a bad reviewer), and this one is probably my favorite. Buffy and Spike are so sweet together. And your plot is fantastic. I feel so bad for Spike, but some of the things you've come up with are ingenious. I can't wait to find out what happens when Finn moves in. And I feel bad for Buffy, but I also think that it could actually be really good for Spike to see that "punishment" in the Giles/Summers household doesn't mean pain. Also, your original concept for this story is wonderful. I adore hurt/comfort stories, and the things Spike has gone through make his relationship with Buffy even sweeter. It's also a wonderful way to combine the sensitivity of William and the 'Big Bad' persona of Spike in one character. In stories where Spike is human, that can be quite hard to do, because he hasn't had around 200 years of character development and changes. But this situation handles that brilliantly. Anyway, kudos on an amazing fic, and I really, really hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the good work!
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