|Reviews for Freedom|
| annette-ella chapter 20 . 10/7/2014
great Story. please more
| Nalini-Singh175 chapter 20 . 9/30/2014
hi, I've enjoyed this story so far and I hope you complete it someday soon. It is rare to find a harry potter/ twilight crossover that is long let alone complete. I also have read some of your other stories and are taking my time making my way though the rest. What I love most about your stories about Harry is how you see him, how you describe him with a mix of confidence, strength, and fluff. It gets so tiring reading time and time again his story in much the same way and the guilt ( for there always will be guilt) always seems to be fresh and not healed or partly so unlike in most of your stories. I love harry being the rock!
besides from that all I would recommend you do when you have them time of cause is read some of the chapters out loud and see where the sentences go wrong but it's not big thing I've read worse.
oh and yes this story has made my day brighter like many of your stories.
| jesskalynn4 chapter 20 . 9/5/2014
I hope you start updating again. I'm loving this. Did you think about making Rose and Emmett humans so Rose can have a baby?
| mattdombast chapter 20 . 9/2/2014
Awesome amazing brilliant chapter looking forward to more candy and Esme Cooking for harry and Bella Ginny dying
| mattdombast chapter 19 . 9/2/2014
Just really love this threesome
| mattdombast chapter 18 . 9/2/2014
Just amazing and Jacob really need to be kicked
| mattdombast chapter 17 . 9/2/2014
Love Harry's family
| mattdombast chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
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| mattdombast chapter 14 . 9/2/2014
So sweet and sexy yeah I just wish that bella dies
| mattdombast chapter 13 . 9/2/2014
| mattdombast chapter 12 . 9/2/2014
So happy that Harry is now the boss of the pack
| mattdombast chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
That was hot kinda want them to be able to eat food that is made of blood and to see marcus get his candy
| mattdombast chapter 10 . 9/2/2014
Awesome Harry rocks bella should just die
| mattdombast chapter 9 . 9/2/2014
Bella so needs to die