|Reviews for Freedom|
| Tilue Akane chapter 12 . 6/15
Hot DAYUM! This story is pure porn with Harry lol!
| doxiesmom14 chapter 20 . 6/7
I love the story. Especially with his family (James, Lily, Sirius, Remus and Severus) came back to help him. I just wish you would continue either story they are both good.
| zorra101 chapter 8 . 7/17/2015
Love that song and love Captain Crunch.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/8/2015
This is interesting and I liked that it was Demetri/Harry. I don't think there are too many of was a surprise that they were drawn to Jasper. I thought they may become close friends or be more like a brothers in arms kind of thing. But then in just 2 chapters it's going to be a threesome, when it was already perfect with just Demetri and Harry. I'm not completely against it, I like Jasper far more than the other twilight guys besides Emmett. It's just highly likely Jasper isn't the only one besides them that was used as a weapon or went through war. With the way you put it,that is the only thing that drew them in and then they felt the pull, what are they going to mate with anyone that they come across that had similar lives as them too? Well, I'll continue to read this and see how it goes and it see what else you can come up with. But, since it's been nearly 2 years since you've updated this comment might not even matter.
| annette-ella chapter 20 . 10/7/2014
great Story. please more
| Nalini-Singh175 chapter 20 . 9/30/2014
hi, I've enjoyed this story so far and I hope you complete it someday soon. It is rare to find a harry potter/ twilight crossover that is long let alone complete. I also have read some of your other stories and are taking my time making my way though the rest. What I love most about your stories about Harry is how you see him, how you describe him with a mix of confidence, strength, and fluff. It gets so tiring reading time and time again his story in much the same way and the guilt ( for there always will be guilt) always seems to be fresh and not healed or partly so unlike in most of your stories. I love harry being the rock!
besides from that all I would recommend you do when you have them time of cause is read some of the chapters out loud and see where the sentences go wrong but it's not big thing I've read worse.
oh and yes this story has made my day brighter like many of your stories.
| jeskasaurus93 chapter 20 . 9/5/2014
I hope you start updating again. I'm loving this. Did you think about making Rose and Emmett humans so Rose can have a baby?
| mattdombast chapter 20 . 9/2/2014
Awesome amazing brilliant chapter looking forward to more candy and Esme Cooking for harry and Bella Ginny dying
| mattdombast chapter 19 . 9/2/2014
Just really love this threesome
| mattdombast chapter 18 . 9/2/2014
Just amazing and Jacob really need to be kicked
| mattdombast chapter 17 . 9/2/2014
Love Harry's family
| mattdombast chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
| mattdombast chapter 15 . 9/2/2014
| mattdombast chapter 14 . 9/2/2014
So sweet and sexy yeah I just wish that bella dies
| mattdombast chapter 13 . 9/2/2014