Reviews for Blinx 3 Prolouge
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Umm... that other review I left was a little long and crazy to be honest. But listen. Gour not only one of the last british fans left, but your probably one of the last blinx fans on earth, other than a few hundred or a thlusand people. Ive probably lost all hope that a blinx 3 will come out at all. I think blinx is sadly done for. But I definitly aprove of your prolouge and think its awesome. Sorry for the childishish ending I posted and all that. I wondr what happened to Artoon anyway...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
you just gave me an amaizing and awfull idea for the ending...
say instead of after the events of blinx 2, it happens just after blinx 2,right after all the sweepers left to save world 5j7a. this group, along with the rest of east city, attack the time factory! with the sweepers gone the controll room diddnt stand a chance. then blinx arrives before any of the other sweepers do. seeing all the dammage, blinx rushes to the control room to find this ZED leader you described, pointing a gun at the CEO. ''CEO!'' blinx says. not careing the Zed character brings the gun around and shoots blinx once in the chest. blinx crumbles to the ground, sweeper in hand. ''BLINX...!'' the CEO says. the ZED charcter then turns his attention back to the CEO. ''As I was saying, once were done here, then we'll focous on the rest of Oak City.'' barely alive, blinxlowly raises his sweeper, loaded with a bomb or two. ''goodbye, CE-''. ''NO'' blinx fires his sweeper, instaintly killing the ZED person. blinx falls back to the ground. the CEO wearly comes to blinx's side, comeing to his knees. minniuts later the other sweepers arive, celibraiting in victory after saveing world 5j7a, untill they notice the destruction of the factory. they search around untill they reach the control room, finding the CEO pulling blinx into a sitting possition against the wall, speak to him in a small, calm voice. every one gathers around, untill eventuialy blinx's friends arrive, incluiding the newly engaged Necoji and Catherine, Pelon,and others. Im not sure what blinx would say before he died, but thats difficult, ya know. Im talking about Blinx Dieing, which is hard...
TheDarkSlayer666 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
This is good and it just started. Keep up the good work. :)
Dissidia180 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
:) Took ya long enough, mate!

Just for confirmation, I know Jake outside of FanFiction, so I'm not just being horrible because I feel like being horrible.