Reviews for The Sleeping Beast
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 3 . 8/19/2014
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Interesting, keep it coming
LadySnape88 chapter 2 . 8/18/2014
And why does he want in her room?
jitra chapter 3 . 8/18/2014
Interesting idea.
Blue night fairy chapter 3 . 8/18/2014
A interesting idea, but you do need to work on the content of the story. By extending your ideas more and including more describing words your story will be more interesting to read.

Before you write anymore chapters you should think about the plot and write out a short plan for your story. The more effect you put into planning your story, the better it will be.

Another tip is to proof read, re-write, proof read, re-write.
Use a thesaurus to help you find new words and to expand your vocabulary.
Good luck with your story!
go.suck.on.a.lemon chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
Frakking cool, I love the concept!
lilbit1016 chapter 2 . 12/27/2011
Wow this is getting pretty good :)
VirginaBlueBelle chapter 2 . 11/22/2011
Looking forward to what happens next.
aliceAmnesia chapter 2 . 11/7/2011
oooooo loved it more please ! :P
KuteKat133 chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
update soon!
Akatsuki's Kyuubi chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
Aww I would like to see this story continue soon its got a very good start.
Angelwells chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
oh cool update, liked it, cant wait to see what hes up to now lol

Angel :D
Marie Pattinson - Snape chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
mmmmm cant wait for more
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
love it

htr17 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Great beginning.

Can't wait to see more of Hermione and Severus.

Update please!
KG-613 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Great teaser, I can't wait for the full chapter.

If you need a beta I am more than willing. I haven't set up my beta profile but if you're interested let me know. I can give you my strengths and all that jazz.
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