Reviews for The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas Alternative Ending
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23
good
fine out urself chapter 1 . 7/30
thx again
find out urself chapter 1 . 7/30
thx
John-im-crushed-Bender chapter 1 . 4/25
Really good idea with a surprising ending!
Whitegamma97 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
wow, that's different. I loved it! I absolutely loved and hated the boy in the striped pyjama's. It's too horrible. You write beautifully.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Hey. I love it! It wasn't as good as the original ending since that actually made me cry, but it was really good. Keep up the good work
shantellaxo chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
This is a realistic approach to the events that had been, I think this is one of the most original pieces I've read on The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas- because it was unlikely there would be a happily ever after. The film has slight misconceptions as the Jews wouldn't be allowed near the electric fence. If a soldier saw a Jew escaping they'd be shot. So you clearly paid attention in class, I like it:-)
Nayab chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Liked this but can u finish it off with him saying he is a German not a Jew and the soldier not believing him but his father comes and stops him from getting shot
Stuffy boo chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Good I like it how you left it on a cliffhanger
MissGymnast chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
A bit boring and way too short try make it a bit longer and better. Other than that I suppose It was OK.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
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Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
D::: I was looking for a happy ending alternate ending. : My feels were in overdrive on the movie and now this? D: my heart is frowning
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
our class has'nt finished the book yet but every sentence miss reads out the whole class jumps with exietment.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
why didn't u add a elipsis
immanuel chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
did the soldger shoot bruno
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