Reviews for Technically
BlueSkyAtNight chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
Another fanastic chapter, looking forward to the next as always.
sylia91 chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
Balthazar is a butt but I still kinda like him. It's nice for the brothers to see John like this. Idealistic and caring but it's very bittersweet.
kasey123 chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
That was good need more
Nyx Ro chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
PLEASE tell me that you're going to finish this! I want to know whose life is going to be saved, and how John is going to get around the memory wipe. {:-(
Girl-of-Geekery chapter 4 . 6/5/2012
I really really like this!

I love stories where the boys go back and meet younger John; but so many aren't very well written, there is no plot, or they are out of character.

But yours is quite the opposite - you've got them all pegged, a good story going, and you're writing is very enjoyable. :)

I hope you plan to update again, I would love to read more!
Von chapter 4 . 5/9/2012
This new dynamic is adorabobble.

And John doesn't know about hunting, right?
Sotobow chapter 4 . 2/1/2012
"You know me, Sam. Am I going away before I get an answer out of you?"

"You don't know me. You don't know how long I can go without giving an answer."

Haha! That kinda sums up Sam and John. :D

You know, I always thought seeing more of those two would be interesting. As bad a father as John was sometimes, he really loved his sons and was fiercely protective of them.

I like that you mentioned the scar (and yeah, those stitches, less than elegant. Lol!). That whole thing was probably my favorite part of the doomed (at least for me) season 7. Such initial promise. -sigh- Oh well. I have five seasons I love.

I always liked younger John, too. He was such a sweetie! Who would've guessed?

Great chapter! I'll read more of any SPN fic you decide to write. And if not, that's okay, too. Whatever you decide. :)
jade02 chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
damn you. Only your stories can make me cry - Show once in a while, but only YOUR stories.

The conversation between Not!Dad and Sam did me in. Sam's pain - at everything - his relationship with John, lossing Jess, hell, the past - everything was so palpable, so raw... it hurt to read it. His need to be close John and his fear of being close to this John... Poor Sammy.
pandora jazz chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
What a nice surprise.

I enjoyed John and Sam's conversation.

My favorite scenes were how Sam knew the footsteps approaching were not Dean's, Sam was right about Dean watching them from the picnic table, John congratulating Sam on going to Stanford and Sam explaining how he only trusted Dean to stitch his hand.

Thanks for the wonderful update.
donilou2 chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
I'm glad to see you're still working on this one Clair. I'd feel bad, and a little cheated to be honest if you didn't finish it, but I would understand. It's the kind of insight I wish the show would give us but they don't seem to want to and it's hurting what few fans the show has left.

If you've stopped watching the show you haven't missed anything I'm afraid and the future isn't looking any better.

At any rate, I was very pleased to get this up-date in my mailbox this morning and hope to see the rest of this story soon.

Until then, stay well, and enjoy our boys for what they could be, not what they are.
ccase13 chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
I like how young John keeps on trying to connect with his son. I hope Sam can get some good feelings from knowing how his dad was before rage and shock and alcohol changed him so badly.

I'm glad your Supernatural muse is feeling better. I'm still pretty darn offended and enraged by THAT episode but I did think of your Sam stories when it was Sam rather than Dean who actually held the dying Bobby Singer's hand.
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
YAY! Sorry, I didn't mean to get excited or anything... I just... You wrote another chapter *_* I know, I know... It's stupid and all, but it made me smile to able to read one more chapter of one of your adventures

Good one, caring John is lacking on this world LOL Even if needs to be young John ;)


sylia91 chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
So glad to see you continuing this. 'When nothing else seems real, I know that Dean is real.' Love this line. This season may be sometimes spotty but it has accomplished the job of getting the brothers back together as they realize they are each other's touchstone and the only thing they can count on. I wish it wasn't at the cost of many characters I've come to love but maybe the point is that where everything else may come and go, at the core of it is Sam and Dean.
Nyx Ro chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
*sniff* So beautiful! Thank you for this. :,)
Meggin Lane chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
OOOohhh! clair I'm so glad you wrote this.

If Sam has the brain wiring to have bad hallucinations he should at least be able to have good ones too. The brain has many ways to protect itself when facing harm and quick as an eyelashes blink protects our vision from dust or worst the brain can do all kinds of tricks to deflect the most harmful damage to us.

And it's perfect that you chose Sam to see his father, and it makes even more sense that the version he chose to see was the young man he met when he'd traveled back in the past, before all the stuff had turned that good guy into the obsessed drill Sargent that pushed his boys into becoming soldiers. Only younger John would have said "please..."

I hope this show can still inspire you occasioanly because nobody sets up a story like you do!

***Spoiler alert***

I read in an interview that Jared gave recently that Sam is finally going to have his full blown break down and will have to be institutionalized. I never bought the crap that Sam was "managing" so I'm glad that the writers are going to, at least, give his character the chance that they never have given Dean's character in letting Sam behave like a human being and not like some energizer bunny (LOL)

He said it was going to coincide with the arrival of the baby and I'm glad to hear that the show is going to extend the same courtesy to one of it's main actors as it did for one of the co stars when Misha's boy was born.

Hang in there! (((clair)))
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