Reviews for Harry Potter, The Jedi That Would Not Die |
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![]() ![]() fudge you gay fat bastard shagging the murder and rapist pedo child molester riddles lackies |
![]() ![]() Wow |
![]() ![]() Needs more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Jedi should have wiped the floor with them you still made them way to weak and why would harry not just kill malfoy like that was the dumbest thing he could do in the situation |
![]() ![]() ![]() He really should have just killed malfoy and the others, he was weak not to |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Voldemort still have his Horcruxes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Needs updates. |
![]() ![]() et la force c est plus que pouser et soulrver des pierre |
![]() ![]() bon je voudrait bien que voldemore dégaje. a par sa c est a ces coo . dans l univer star wars vodemort norait pas pus fair sa il aurait éter découvertous suit et son essece détruit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story so far, hope there's a new chapter in the near future ;) |
![]() ![]() pour qoui les jedi n on pas santis pa présence de voldemor. |
![]() ![]() mdîgi clorien ne faits pas tous dark sidious a 13 500 il y a eu des sits et des jedi qui en avait moins et qui sont devenu trés puissent,puis dolbuldor ne pas claker des doit pour fair de la magie |
![]() ![]() Your an asshole, killing Sirius, all you damn Authors kill everyone close to harry, sick bastard! |
![]() ![]() Wow, so edgy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, but Voldemort's actions don't make sense. You have him going to find information as a wraith. The next scene he is in Azkaban looking for Harry. Why would he go to Azkaban for info? Why would he think Harry is there? While the idea of Voldemort hiding in Harry is interesting, how is that ok. The canon has him only possess animals until Quirrel willing joins him and all his previous possessed died. Everything we know previously suggests that possession is a big deal. Why is he waiting for the right moment in Harry? How would he know that Harry wouldn't spend the rest of his life in Azkaban? Historically, he pulls back and looks for more info after a loss. Why is jumping into this plan right away when you said he was looking for information? Anyway, thank you for your work. |