|Reviews for Author's Guild I: The 2008 Ego Incident|
| truephan chapter 2 . 3/12/2012
Now we get into DPhandon! YAY! Even though I like the chapter, I'm still confused here. Rebecca is being punished for being involved in a DP story and so she's not only put into a oubliette for 12 hours, but she's made to be a half-ghost with amnesia? Sheesh! What kind of maniacs is this Council of AGOs? And why is this Buchara creature this cruel? And how is being an AGO equated to being a powerful half-ghost?
But even so, I hope you're going to answer these questions within the story. But I am intrigued with it nevertheless. So, I'm on the ride!
But I must get off momentarily to get ready for snoozeville and I will continue with it tomorrow. tays! truephan
| truephan chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Hello, there, Phyllis and surprise! Thanks for asking me to read one of your stories. And, my, looks like you've dealt too much with writing instead of studying! No wonder Bandersnatch was on your case! LOL!
Well, as you can see, I'm starting with this story because it's a DP one. I'm not sure if I'll read the others, because I'm not a fan of those story lines. 'Alice in Wonderland' was one of my least fav Disney stories, I'm SO NOT a Pokemon fan, and I don't know anything about the "Labyrinth' "MirrorMask" story lines, so I hope you won't be offended. I am a Zelda fan, so I might take a look at that one at least.
Now about this story so far. Quite honestly, I'm both fascinated and befuddled with it. I think this is a very clever and unique twist at looking at stories over all and DP specifically, but I don't think I understand the AGO thing. I've read the explanation in your profile (twice) and I don't think I truly understand it. Are the AGO sort of like the Observants? Really not productive and who's sole purpose is to observe? If not, just what is their purpose?
But I can suspend belief with the whys and all and still enjoy this story. And speaking of which, introducing an original character right off the bat was unique as well. Well, let me get to the next chapter now. tays. truephan
| IsabelleAuthor chapter 4 . 1/12/2012
Oh, no! What's going to happen to Rebecca? I guess I'll have to wait! - I like Jonah and his muse!
| ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
O.O Wow, I did not see that coming. Marvelous plot twist. :)
Jonah and Absynius were amazing characters! :D I'd love to read more about them.
And very interesting challenge, Phyllis. _
| Lady Rae of Ravenclaw chapter 4 . 12/3/2011
This is really good, but I don't understand the challenge. . . .'
| VampireFrootloopsRule chapter 4 . 12/1/2011
I think i know the reference, but not what its from so i wont give any hints .
Ilike how u placed absynius' nameearlier to clear up the mishap. I like thosetwo also . and some people dont know what a cameo is (i didnt until recently) so that one might need explanation.
Good job. as always
| wannabesuperboy chapter 4 . 12/1/2011
hmm Dani whadda you think it is?
Me:what about you dad?
Me:*face palm* ben get kevin
Dani,Nouccturne and Ben together:HEY
| ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 3 . 11/20/2011
I'm so glad I'm reading this story. _ It is sooooooooooo good!
:) I'm glad that Rebecca/Fable/Abigail remembered her prayer journal- Hopefully it is the start of a lot of remembering.
Vlad is hilarious. And I loved their conversation about "Butterbiscuits". XD Maddie sounds like a lot of cats I know.
I can't wait to read what happens next!
P.S.: I am totally using "Oh my ZigZag" from here on out. XD OMZ, sounds great to me! XD
| wannabesuperboy chapter 3 . 11/18/2011
uh this seems awkward but can i join the AGO? it would give me great pleasure
| VampireFrootloopsRule chapter 3 . 11/17/2011
Love the nickname! And thanks for the shout out too!. im loving the (sort of onesided) bonding ging on between abi and lad, its too bad hes using her for personal gain. Im also thinking of writing an AGO fic( if the nonexistant council allows) but i dont know whe thatll come out. I also laughed so hard when i read the part of the cat named butterbiscuits. that was so awesome i read it three ties! And the flying bit too :D pm ya later!
| ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Oh, shiny button... Oh, I mean- _ Hehe
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next. The flying lesson was great. _ And when she was trying to remember Danny's last name- I couldn't stop laughing. :)
Keep up the fantastic work, Phyllis.
| ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
*Stops by the review button* Oh... My... Kirk... Phyllis this is amazing! :) Bandersnatch is great! The story just pulls the reader in and keeps them coming back for more. I love the way the characters interact! :)
I can't wait to read the next chapter! _ Fantastic job.
| empnk chapter 2 . 10/14/2011
I love this story. It's very uneak (Can't spell it.) I can't wait for the next chapter. You've got me hooked. Great Job! Keep up the great work!
| MiniHayden chapter 2 . 10/13/2011
This story is amazing :) I love it!
Can you get into the AGO just by asking? I've seen people do it before... Or do you have to be invited? Meh, I'm confused :/
| Ellenar Ride chapter 2 . 10/13/2011
... This. Is. EPIC!