Gah! Oh frond, you're gonna make me poo my pants here! Keep the awesomeness to yourself please. 3

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Thats what I'm feeling like at the moment... *cries in corner* I cant even-*sniffle* tell you-*sniffle sniffle* just can't-*takes bite of chocolate* why!

You're really good with making a story line and I really like it! Nice cliff-hanger, but the only problem is you switch from past tense to future to present and so forth in the same sentence at the wrong times, other than that I like it a lot! And I totally forgive your mistakes because of how good this story is, and how much I am just wanting to end this review to read the next chapter! Oh frond, I love you Arty!

nice story
plz update soon

ooh...who is it? Holly? Trouble? OPAL?!
this is seriously awesome...

I will pray for your friends.
I love this story! Lol, for one moment I got scared it was artemisxOC... :) please update soon.

Just a little advice, the plot is good so far but maybe you would want to try a beta? There's just a few grammatical mistakes that make it a bit more difficult to read in places, if you don't want to have a beta- maybe just try looking through it a bit more carefully?

Please continue! I finally got to read the graphic novel of book one and my addiction has been revamped! Artemis and Holly looked like I imagined them, but Mulch and Foaly didn't. I guess I figured they would be more humanoid. Mulch was a lot like the satyr guy for Disney's Hercules . . .
I hope your friends are safe. I heard about the typhoon and its seems absolutely horrible. I'm somewhat Christian (in no way strictly Catholic) and I'll be sure to think of them when I pray.

I will pray for them.
So, good story, I think I will like it as long as it stays a Holly x Artemis fic. And u assured me it will stay that way...so no super errors, though some minor grammar errors, and u do leave out some words. But that's okay because many people more mistakes and stuff, so I don't care about the minor stuff...

I'm really sorry to hear about the hurricane and your friends...I'll include them in my prayers. Also, I am really enthusiastic about the school setting...I love stories that have Artemis is the school setting presented in the book, but it is so hard to find them, because they usually have a Mary-sue or a school dance. IrArtemis decides to transfer to a public school, so thanks for the awesome story

Please continue! Great story so far..

I really love this story, but there are a few things that could be improved upon.

1. Grammar, you tend to just have a few minor mistakes but a good way to check yourself is put it in Google translate and have it read it to you (or get a beta).

2. POV, you switch around A LOT, in one sentence you have two different POVs a few times. My suggestion is to try and figure out which one works for you and go with it :)

Hope to see more (Holly) soon!

Oh my God I love this fanfiction! Artemis is so damn cool, and he look so in love with Holly! I'm looking forward that Holly remember everything! Thank you for have wrote this, you made me happier!

Please Update! I lurv this beautiful story. :) I want more. MORE!

I would think that a genius such as Artemis would most Definetely be an atheist, or at least agnostic. They way he is built as a character makes it seen unlikely that he would have any religious belief.