Reviews for Flynn or Eugene?
CaraLee934 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Yay!
This is very nice.
jamelia116 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Compared to the men at the Snuggly Duckling,"Rumpelstiltskin would look good."

This story is worth reading for that line alone! Love Tangled, and I loved what you've done here. I'll definitely come back to explore your site more!

jamelia
clarinetgirl2427 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
That was perfect. Of course the king, or any good father for that matter, would give him an ultimatum like that. Really enjoyable and brought a big smile to my face.
Liliththestormgoddess chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Nice! Very well done. I can see this happening, and I like that Eugene was getting knighted.
Glittering Turquoise chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Great job! I think it is a good idea because Rapunzel needs to spend more time with her parents first before she can marry Eugene.
Eternal Sidekick chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Well conceived and executed mini-fic.

Finding a voice for a character who had roughly four minutes of screen time and no dialog is a daunting prospect, but you did a very admirable and believable job with your depiction of the king. You have given him a solid combination of authority, wisdom, love for his daughter. (Not to mention, some incredibly good lines.)

Eugene is off his game and well out of his comfort zone for most of this story, which given the circumstances, seems very appropriate.

Brief, but telling, this is an excellent story! Keep up the great work!
LaneIA chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Great story! I really enjoyed this.