|Reviews for Between a Kiss and a Lie: Xanxus|
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/21
It's been A YEEAAAR, PLEASE UPDATE, OMYGHAD PLS PLS PLS SVP, I NEED THIS WE ALL NEED THIS, Je l'aime ! Mahal ko ito, isang taaaooon naaa, omaayghhhad, my pamilee
| nakeddbanana chapter 24 . 6/12
this is beautiful I can't asdfgjnikleix I'd looove to read more of this
| ksecc1 chapter 24 . 4/15
What a cute story! I love your Xanxus. I'd love to see more of this.
| RyuuenXKai chapter 23 . 4/1
I'm very interested on what the Varia reaction would like if they hear her laugh..kufufufu...
(O.O Mukuro, is that you? Or is it..)
| RyuuenXKai chapter 8 . 3/28
I pray that this story have a good ending...since what Xanxus feel about her is practically a crush! this is not cool man...not at all..
| RyuuenXKai chapter 4 . 3/28
Author San...I LOVE THIS STORY! HELL! I EVEN READ IT THE SECOND TIME! (P.s this is my third time.)
And I would like to put this under wattpad under my name
I will leave a link to your website in here, . I wouldn't dare stole your credit of this awesome of a story. Hell, -_- I don't even know half of what the word in this story mean.
But if you reject this offer. It fine. I understand...but you can you at least tell me? Cause like you would leave me hanging with false hope if you don't. T-T
Thank you for taking you time reading this messages, which I doubt would be excepted.
| RyuuenXKai chapter 24 . 3/16
Iemitsu. Let me tell you this.
I DONT FUCKING CARE ABOUT YOUR FUCKING SON! (at least not in this fanfiction) AND THE WAY YOU FUCKING SAY IT MAKE ME FUCKING HATE YOU MORE! I DONT CARE IF YOUR EYE SOFTEN AT THE SIGHT OF PLEADING! SO WHAT IF I WAS IN THE FANFIC AND TOLD YOUR SON?! ARE YOU GOING TO FUCKING KILLED ME BITCH!? (「ﾟ益ﾟ)「
CHROME HAD THE RIGHT TO DO ANYTHING! I FUCKING TELL YOU BITCH! I DONT CARE IF YOUR VOICE IS COLD WHEN YOU MENTIONED HER! ROKUDO MUKURO IS NOT YOUR MOTHERFUCKER SON MIST GUARDIAN! YOU SON OF A BITCH! HOW COULD YOU TELL LAL TO CALM DOWN WHEN YOU TALK ABOUT HER STUDENT LIKE THAT IN FRONT OF HER?! O.O
YOU DONT FUCKING KNOW HOW MUCH CHROME HAD SACRIFICED! (Not like I do anyway. -_- but that not the problem right now.)
HELL! I DARE YOU TO KICK HER OUT OF VONGOLA! (Sorry chrome.) YOU WOULD IMMEDIATELY LOSE YOU MOTHERFUCKER SON 'MIST GUARDIAN'!
HELL! THE SAY MIST 'GUARDIAN' MIGHT EVEN DESTROYED THE FUCKING ENTIRE VONGOLA! IM SURE YOU WOULD LOSE ALOT OF TRUSTED FROM THE PEOPLE WHO KNOWN AND INTERACT WITH CHROME!
IT FUCKING GOOD THAT YOU DONT KNOW THAT THE VARIA IS FOND OF HER! AND THE BAD NEW IS THAT THE VARIA DONT KNOW THAT YOU THAT ABOUT HER!
THEY MAY EVEN BE HAPPY ABOUT IT, BUT IM SURE YOU WONT! YOU EVEN KEEP ALL THE FUCKING INFORMATION ABOUT HER!
WHY DONT YOU DICK TRUST HER?! NO MATTER WHAT YOU FUCKING DECIDED, DOKURO CHROME IS VONGOLA 10TH GENERATION MIST GUARDIAN!
(And of course, the Varia cloud guardian ;)
Btw, Sorry for the language)
| RyuuenXKai chapter 17 . 3/15
Tch. Nosy people.
| AshdelDeifria chapter 24 . 3/5
I really really love your story ️️ Please update more soon, i'll be waiting for the next chapter xD ... I can't wait what'll happen if they will know about chrome's situation. And am thinking if chrome has an unrequited love for tsuna? ( i hope not :( ...)
Still im looking forward for the next chapters to come _
| Zatasn chapter 24 . 2/2
OMG i want to wait until the final publication for now to comment something. The story was... just...OMFG was incredible please continue with this history i absolutely love it, it was sooooooooo amazing, great job just that great job and was amazing to read that master piece
| Lovethemist chapter 24 . 12/16/2015
Wow I'm very thankful of your very existence. Finally Xanxus has kissed Chrome. I also like it that you made Chrome someone who is more ' mafia like ' than the other guardians. I've been waiting for the birthday party. I hope you'll post the next chapter very soon. Thank you.
| Hay chapter 24 . 10/24/2015
I've waited so fucking long for this story to continue.
I . Love . You . And . This . Story.
| Fey chapter 24 . 10/7/2015
I'm a biiig fan of yours and I made you a fanart,, It's not that good but I hope you like it :D please check it out! . ?fbid10204068116217987&id1676960943&seta.10204054754083942.1073741828.1676960943&refid17&_ft_top_level_post_id.10204065825400718%3Atl_objid.10204068116177986%3Athid.1676960943%3A306061129499414%3A82%3A0%3A1446361199%3A-8741750602778154957&_tn_E
Please make Xanxus be happy... Thank you!
| Panda chapter 24 . 9/28/2015
I really really love this story! I like it so much I can read 15 chapters nonstop :3 whoohoo... I love the way you write about Varia and Xanxus' feeling, it seems like you understand them so much.. I can't wait to see Xanxus make Chrome become the Varia mist guardian and take her over tsuna hwahahaha.. Oh will she reply to Xanxus' feeling? Please make him happy... Btw this is the best fanfic I ever read and I even recommend it to my sister kufufufu.. :D Please update regularly please please please... Thank you!
| Tyffanie. T chapter 24 . 8/25/2015
ahh yeah! I've been waiting for this! FINALLY they kiss :D haha keep it up! :D