Reviews for The First Time
Clioundra chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Poor astral doesn't have a clue what just happened XD
divpotterdemitributebender chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Well this was awkward. But cute. That was REALLY cute.
neko1998 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
awwwww! **
star X3 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
i love it XD
Himmeh chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
So sweet!
Loved it, keep the good work! o/
AzucenaXshadows chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
for some strange reason i found the ending cute

o.0 lol
DomeInsane chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
Pffft Astral. xD

"You have a...hole in your body?" Omigosh I could just picture the alarm, concern, and curiosity on his face just then.
Hobbes1993 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Aww I like it so much. Also I glade was a little bit older. Also I love how you did it. Keep it up with other stories.
Kyon-neko chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I really like Keyshipping [ (although I haven't watched Zexal as of yet...

Anyway, good story. I enjoyed reading it, and hope to read more in the future ]
Hana13 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
AWWE! - So romanctic! I wonder if Yuma can really go into the key after the whole "overlay" thing from episode 24...

Hey, do know some guy named "mturningm" from tumblr? I saw that he wrote some Zexal stories, I really like them!

I was wondering if you could convince him to post his stories on here! I really want to read his stories whenever I want, without going through the trouble of searching through his archives! It's really hard and tiring, ya'know! T-T

I really want to review for his stories too! So, do you think you could talk to him? It's okay if you refuse my request, I really don't like to impose on people too much...

Well, I love your stories! Please update more! -