|Reviews for Two of a Kind|
| sandy4321 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Loved the chapter! I can't wait to see what happens in this story!
| motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
wow, different, I like, can't wait for more...
| Montara chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I can understand Alice but she really has bad timing!
I like the idea of this story. I can't imagine Edward overweight though...maybe because I don't know how many kilo he has.
| Ellachanted chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Gee, I wonder what the chances are they will meet again?
I'm thinking pretty good. Or this is going to be one short B & E story :)
Great start. Looking forward to more.
| Nvrbnbitten chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Very good start Nilla. I really loved Loner and am currently in the middle of rereading it
| TD69 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Awesome first chapter. And I love Alice already.
Also, I loved this sentence, is basically describes Bella's 23 years with her mother" It wasn't until later I realized the knife was still lying on the floor, and my mother seemed to have forgotten all about its existence."
| JediJenny chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
First chapter and I am hooked already. Looking forward to future chapters.
| tatie1970 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I like your writing so I will keep on reading. But an overweight Edward ? Yikes. I've been having issues with my weight for pretty much my whole teenage and adult life. Not the overweight thing, the too skinny thing. Believe it or not, this makes it very difficult for me not to resent people who are overweight. In my mind, I'm overweight myself and I thoroughly loathe that. So I guess this will be a good exercise : reading a story about my fav fictional character as an overweight guy... and not resenting him.
| KACULLEN chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Love the new story!
So Bella needs to get as far away from Renee as possible because she is 's terrible that Bella wasn't allowed to see Charlie again until she was Bella have an eating disorder? Cause she said she was going to get rid of the cake she ate and she said she always make sure she doesn't gain any weight.
I don't know that I have ever read a fic with an overweight Edward before so this should be interesting. It's kind of nice to see him not be totally perfect for a change.
Will this story be as long as Loner?
| BellaCullenPR chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Ohh Renee Eff you! XD
Patiently waiting for more :)
| Sheeijan chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Interesting. Renee just used that as an excuse, didn't she, to get out town? At least that seems to be the case to me. I'm a cynic...
Can't wait to see where you go with this...
| Julia Ba chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
That's a very interesting start, I'll keep reading, pls go on! :)
| Mz-Star chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Awesomeness right here!
| AlexaC chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
A really interesting start, I have no idea where this will go but I am totally intrigued by it. I wanted to smack Renee, for her comments about Edward and the way she treats Bella in this chapter. I'm sure Edward and Bella will meet again soon and I can't wait to see what happens when they do!
| Julsb28 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Ooooo, I am liking this different Edward and Bella! Although I am so used to model/adonis like Edwards that I am finding it more difficult to picture this one at the moment. Will just focus on those gorgeous green eyes lol!