Reviews for Hell to Heaven, No Matter is isn't Perfect
SaKuRa-MIna chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
That was cute. I love how you have Mama Williams undoubtedly knowing that Danny is in love with Steve. I'm pretty sure it's obvious to everyone except them. It's almost inevitable that they get together. I also completely love how accepting she is of it. Awesome story!
lilz54 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Nicely done!
francis2 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Danny has changed a lot in that one season. A mother always knows.
Smooth Doggie chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
A really nice story and sadly one I wouldn't have read if you'd labelled it slash/pre-slash. I think it's perfectly fine before you think I'm homophobic, I'm not, purely feel that McGarrett & William's characters are very straight guys - but to each there own opinion on this. All that aside, your story was beautifully written and full of the sentiment and commradery I found in the military - I'm sure that the police/fire services are exactly the same. The family aspect of it, from both sides, is bang on and I think your writing style is superb. Thank you for sharing with us - SG
Jazmingirl chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
awe I love this kind of stories is great to see their love through somebodys else eyes