Reviews for The Key To My heart
Mango chapter 11 . 4/5/2014
I think you added too much extra stuff.
Mango chapter 4 . 4/5/2014
I don't know it is a little too chaotic and fast paced. Your timing is a little off and did you really need to make Moira a mutant? That's pushing it.
LaMartienneElfique chapter 12 . 2/15/2014
Wow... Just wow ! I really enjoyed your story ; the way you described the characters's feelings, all the quotes in german adding a touch to Erik's personnality and, I must confess, the way you wrote the torture scenes was so full of emotions, I couldn't stop reading ! Now, let's see what happens next in "How Do You Mesure" 3
Suebear119 chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
I must say I am loving this so much right now! Can't wait to read more
BetahimeTsukiko chapter 11 . 8/21/2012
So. Awesome. I love the dynamic and how you have made Shaw into this monster for everyone to see; you've shown his true colors as it were.
Star Twins chapter 10 . 7/9/2012
Yeah! I knew Pele wasn't dead!
Star Twins chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Oh my god so much suspense, I must read the next chapter!
Oh I think it will be an awesome fic (yeah, even if it's over, I just read the first chapter so I don't know what will happen) and you're so talented.
SlytherinElf chapter 12 . 6/25/2012
This story is utterly beautiful. The way Charles was breaking was so bittersweet, at some points I didn't want to know what happened next, because how could it be good? I got truly lost in all of the characters emotions. Thank you for writing this.
lotus-bugxm9 chapter 12 . 6/24/2012
Wow...*wipes away tears* :D this story was awesome! I loved it, very creative, and full of so many MANY feels omg lol I loved Erik's tragic German past brought into this and also all the German language translations. Yup! And also...ugh So much Charles torture! And cherik love. I'm glade all turned out happily somewhat in the end. Shaw in this story was just super gross/yet amazingly written haha You did good!

So thanks for the read!
Shadapadaboo chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
ok, so it seems chapter one was just first chapter jitters because you blew me out of the water with this one, I'm glad I presssed the next button, and Now I am excited to read 3~!
Shadapadaboo chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I think Shaw should have taken him on the premise of love for a brother. Then when Erik came after him with the rage of a lover would have been a hell of alot more dramatic...

I'm still reading this though, to see how everything winds up. I look foreward to more!
Pheonix Autumn chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
This is sooo interesting!

I'm having an feeling that moira is an psychic? But then tht disappeared...

I will never know if I don't read the next chapter!
Pheonix Autumn chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
I have a guess that Moira is an mutant? But I don't know...

And that little riddle l? " remember what sets you free" I was thinking anger, but I don't know that answer either...

I loved this chapter!

Hope Charles is okay and Erik finds him soon!'
Purely Fake Innocence chapter 11 . 1/30/2012
arg! I want to finish it today! Its such a good story! I love the little quip about james and micheal
Marblez chapter 12 . 1/23/2012
Wow! This story is amazing!

I seriously cannot wait for more because it is absolutely brilliant!

Shaw is even more evil than he was and the Erik/Charles storyline is coming along so beautifully.

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