|Reviews for He Noticed Her|
| Etheral Thestral chapter 4 . 10/26/2013
Don't get me wrong I like this but I think it seems to much like the book to me
| clumsydolphin chapter 16 . 10/22/2013
Maybe it's just me and if I'm wrong I am very sorry. This story started so good, but I'm now 16 chapters in and they're no closer to being together for one, and for two it seems like at least half this story is actually J.K. Rowling's story and wording as if it was taken from the books. I know sometimes if you stick with canon some of the story has to be put in, but it seems like there is an awful lot copied and it's a fine line to have to skate.
I'm not trying to be mean, it's only my opinion and like I said I could be wrong. I have to quit reading now because it's just bugging me a bit, it just feels wrong. I'm sure it's a great story just not one for me.
| clumsydolphin chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
What I adore about this chapter is that you wrote the girls appropriately giggly for the ages they are in this story. It's not another overly mature and adult Hermione and Ginny when they are just young teen girls. Great job!
| EyeSilver27927 chapter 19 . 9/26/2013
SHE WAS NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO SAY IT.
| EyeSilver27927 chapter 18 . 9/25/2013
"Well isn't this cute? It's like a little loser family." AAAAH! AVPM AVPM AVPM REFERENCE! YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS! Wait... Was that on purpose? Anyway, I love your story!
| hpfan2013 chapter 27 . 8/21/2013
I jut read this, and I love it!:D
| FeatherWing593 chapter 27 . 6/22/2013
This is my absolute favourite Fremione story ever! It was really excellent.
| Alithe Cambre chapter 27 . 6/18/2013
Spectacular! Sixth time I have read this but I don't think I have ever reviewd before! Thank you for writing this!
| master999 chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
You do know that JKR never and i mean NEVER said that thing right? It's headcanon! But nice way to lie and to lure more people into reading your story.
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 27 . 4/11/2013
| Spaz86 chapter 27 . 4/4/2013
This is so cute! I love that Ron and Hermione are much more siblings then JK made them. Fred just works with Hermione. :) are any of the sequels up yet? I am off to check your profile after this, but if they arn't any plan for that soon?
| OwlSky15678 chapter 16 . 3/22/2013
HERMIONE AND FREDDIE
| dark m00n angel chapter 27 . 3/12/2013
Great story and chapters pls update soon!
| HopefulMe chapter 27 . 3/4/2013
I really loved this story! You managed to change so much yet the events are all correct if you know what I mean. I adore how you wrote Hermione's thoughts on her friendship with Harry. She's making me look at him in a completely different way. Great fic :) xxx
| irishwerewolf chapter 27 . 2/24/2013
Absolutely fantastic. One suggestion though love: you might want to change the status of the story from "In-Progress" to "Completed" ;)