Reviews for Not Quite as Planned
The Richmaster chapter 23 . 9/16
Great work on this, I also forgot to mention that the betting scene was particularly fun too..
It's a bit late (early?) now though, so I'll probably start the sequel upon waking up.
The Richmaster chapter 22 . 9/16
It's interesting to see how the various factions are reacting to everything... and in the middle of everything, Kenpachi and Ichigo just want to beat the hell out of each other.
(also I think that this might be review number 950)
The Richmaster chapter 21 . 9/16
The Kurosaki family part was definitely interesting, especially Karin's take on events and what her instincts are telling her.
And that phone call was just great, I could really see Ichigo making a call like that.
The Richmaster chapter 20 . 9/16
Okay the trio of Ichigo, Ishida and Kenpachi were giving me some LotR vibes with a swordsman, an archer and a berserker fighting together while competing over how many enemies they've killed
The Richmaster chapter 19 . 9/16
Nooooo! Gin! how could you?
But it was definitely a fitting way to go; shooting through his own heart to get to the enemy seems like a Gin thing to do.

And Yamamoto is actually doing something, Yay
The Richmaster chapter 18 . 9/16
I particularly liked the second and twelfth divisions
The Richmaster chapter 17 . 9/16
I liked the second omake; never seen something like that done before, even as a joke
The Richmaster chapter 16 . 9/16
The full scale invasion seems interesting, one of my favourite characters was great and Aizen, once more, was Aizen; what more needs to be said?
The Richmaster chapter 15 . 9/16
Insightful thoughts, interesting talks and Aizen being Aizen; good chapter
The Richmaster chapter 14 . 9/16
Soifon integrates with the group surprisingly well
The Richmaster chapter 13 . 9/16
Perfect; everything was just perfect
The Richmaster chapter 12 . 9/16
Nice friendship moment here
The Richmaster chapter 11 . 9/16
Great work here; I loved how you adapted certain things that were shown in canon to be used here.
And good job on Mayuri; his death was well deserved.
The Richmaster chapter 10 . 9/16
The reactions were definitely good here, especially Toshiro and Ishida's and it seems like Mayuri didn't just push Ichigo's Berserk Button he smashed it inward, welded the off switch shut and then pour molten lead over the top
The Richmaster chapter 9 . 9/16
I'm liking what you've done with Ukitake and Soifon
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