|Reviews for Paradise|
| JakiusAmaranthus chapter 2 . 1/3
If you think your writing skills are horrid, then you must be a bloody god of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this. I had tears streaming down my eyes this entire time, that's how sad and well-written it was
| beszt95 chapter 2 . 9/17/2016
| beszt95 chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
| Hyrum The Outcast chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Okay for sort the first one "Love?" was simple amazing. THE best Rio fic ever! That story made me cry, but honestly the seconded one isn't as good but still on my top ten list. Keep writing you great at it, no greats an under statement... simple Marvelous.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
for BLU and JEWEL iv found a song that represents jewel's feeling to BLU ( I'M GONNA LOVE YOU) BY JENNIFER LOVE HEWITT. GOODBYE:)
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
both story's love? and paradise made me sad but it is good that BLU and JEWEL can be with each other for eternity to love, to nurchur and to care for each other. I hold no gruges so I love these story's since this is the end. I d wish u could finish NEXT TO YOU but u made it painfully clear that u cant. that can never be forgiven but I can forgive YOU. it would be an honor to call u FRIEND. but I will say THANK U MY FRIEND FOR EVERYTHING THAT U DID. GOODBYE:) RECONNICE THIS THAT IS MY WORD AND SYMBOLE TO SHOW THE AUTHERS THAT THEY KNOW ME WHEN YOU SEE THOWS 2 THING REMEMBER THAT IS MY MARK MY NAME IS DEVON THATS ALL IM GOING TO SAY. GOODBYE:)
| 4The Spade-Heart chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
| olihmajor chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
This wasn't terrible at all :\ Sure, maybe the emotions weren't as strong as in Love or NtY, but that's still very realistic and moving. Great job on this!
| olihmajor chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Heh, liked the scientific stuff in this. Also, the view on where birds go when they die and such is pretty interesting. Blu's view on after he died was... er, enlightening (for lack of a better word), along with Jewel's from Love.
| Drako1997 chapter 2 . 11/16/2011
Thats something I like more. Don't get me wrong, I liked Love? but this ending is more in my taste. I don't like tragedies, because of some personal reasons.
Well, soon I'll start reading NTY again. You're an awesome and talented author, remember that when you write your storiesm
| BluJewel4ever chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
You think you performed poorly while writing my favorite piece of work on this site? I think you have one distinctive quality in common with your favorite Blu bird. You don't believe in yourself. In order to save your Jewel, whatever that may be, and rise to your full potential, you just have to believe. I think you performed at a gold medal standard, as always, and if you don't have the self confidence to believe that then you might as well give up on writing because your Jewel just drowned herself.
| Chickweed001 chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Dear god, how you're able to put such emotion into a story makes me want to worship you yet murder you at the same time. Anyways, great ending for this story.
| Storylover Vodhr- Dux Ducis chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
Great story, and a great ending.
| Bluetech chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
No words exist to describe such a tear-jerking tale. A truly divine and magnificent piece.
Makes my story Exit Wounds look like a complete failure. Sigh...
I might rewrite it if I have time.
You have thoroughly proven yourself as one of the most dutiful writers I've ever seen.
| El Padrillo chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
Please do not hate me for this, but I kinda like the ending to Love?better than this, because sad ending appeal more to my likes it's good but I prefered the original ending. Sorry...