|Reviews for Morning|
| Amber Treelights chapter 8 . 12/5/2011
This is so sweet, I think I have diabeetus now. Well, it was nice knowing you! Finish oFaF for me when I die.
Okay not really, lol. But yes really about the sweetness.
Not only is Twilestia one of the only ships I dislike, but I view Celestia as more of a godmother to Twilight, and you've portrayed that pretty perfectly here The thought of Twilight falling asleep while studying at the castle library is adorable, as well as in-character for her, even as a filly. Speaking of which, you did an excellent job of balancing Twilight's filly nature, with her adult personality; a lot of the same quirks seem to be still intact, and I quite enjoy that.
Really glad to see Celestia supporting Twilight's love of studying, because honestly, I get kind of sick of others acting like there's something wrong with that. Of course Twilight sometimes gets a bit too wrapped up in it, but essentially, I love her studying habits.
"Teach me something cool!"
Probably my favoritest line So adorable! Oh, Twilight's bright, child-like curiosity is so wonderful here. You've really done good with letting the readers identify with one of the reasons Celestia loves her so much.
Also, I liked your interpretation of her parents, even if not much was done with them. I definitely don't think they'd mind Twilight staying with Celestia a lot at all. After all, they were very supportive of her becoming Celestia's protege in the first place.
Definitely would love to see more Tia/Twilight interaction from you It's just so heartwarming!
| DreadedCandiru2 chapter 8 . 12/5/2011
This is a nice little look at a younger Twilight; the nice thing is that she's still somewhat idealistic to this day.
| Kael Hyun chapter 5 . 12/2/2011
Okay this is going to be a bit out of order but it matches your rant kinda well:
Four words: Celestia is a troll.
Plus all we saw of Luna in season 1 was only 2 lines that's it. not enough to give a true personality just show how sorry she was for hurting her big sis. They gave Luna a true personality in this not something based on those lines but something actually real and that would fit after 1000 years trapped in the moon.
They acted like that because as Pinkie said "It's fun to be scared once in a while" plus from what we can figure they thought it was all part of the Act. Nightmare Night IS like Halloween and that it's about scares and playing with fears.
The solution makes sense FOR THAT DAY that's the point, as that's what Luna was trying to change when it really didn't need to be changed.
Luna and Celestia are Goddesses, they can do what ever they damn well please.
Again Celestia is a troll she probably did it to show Luna what has changed and how even if you want to change something you have to let someone find out for themselves. She was probably catching up on some needed sleep of working on the sun AND moon for the past thousand years. Also it's called being a trickster mentor
Good because she wasn't 'Bitchy or stuck up' she was talking in the same tongue that a monarch would speak in back in the day and some of the sayings she was using back then were vary loose and showed camaraderie and Friendship. The only time she would speak in the loud, aggressive, authoritative voice was when she was pissed or felt she was being wronged or cheated: "Tis a LIE! Thine backside is whole and ungobbled, thou ungrateful WHELP!"
| Arcticmist chapter 7 . 12/1/2011
Sparkly blankets lol. Yes Night sounds like an epic idea.
Here is a request list
Pinkie Pie, Derpy Hooves, Carrot Top, Sweetie Bell, Lyra, Bon Bon, Twilight Sparkle, Scotaloo, Rarity, Oplaessence (this HAS to be funny), and uh Gilda.
| Arcticmist chapter 6 . 12/1/2011
Wow yeah Vinyl's official theme song is Last Friday Night. Whenever I hear the song I think "IT'S FRIDAY" and then I realize it's Tuesday XD.
| Arcticmist chapter 5 . 12/1/2011
I thought Luna was okay in that episode. I pictured her more short tenpered and having the sense not to go in in a scary chariot. I support Luna/Pipsqueak well when the latter gets a bit older.
Lol I love the nicknames Tia and LuLu
| Arcticmist chapter 4 . 12/1/2011
I'm sure Zecora foes EVERYTHING in verse. You did her perfectly.
| Arcticmist chapter 3 . 12/1/2011
Lol love the alternate troll version. I like sometimes laughing at those things. Some people hate trolls but I find most hilarious.
Maybe you should do a Luna one now.
| Arcticmist chapter 2 . 12/1/2011
Yes Dash is probably not a morning person. I want to see a Pinkie Pie one but I'm only on chapter 2...
| Arcticmist chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
You got Fluttershy spot on! I love the interaction between her and Angel. I though Angel was a girl.. Well then I happened to be the girl who went her whole childhood thinking Meadowbrook and Wish Bear were males...
| lord faggot of gay chapter 7 . 11/30/2011
Oh rainfall, how I miss your Nightmare moon chapter. Lol at this chapter though
| Zervziel chapter 7 . 11/30/2011
Congradulations! New brain canon established. This is how I will alway now picture how Photo Finish acts during the day and how she got so full of herself. And yes, I'm convinced she would have that wall-sized TV for the Photo Finish Power Hour (A waste, I'd go on an Elder Scrolls marathon on that thing) And yes I did read this and Textlestia 2 together so I will put in a review on that tonight as well.
| Amber Treelights chapter 7 . 11/30/2011
Oh, lord. Hahahah.
I must say I was not expecting this. At all. I didn't even think you'd do a Morning chapter for Photo Finish, lol. Very glad you did, though, because she's amazing!
The green eyes was a nice touch, really, and I really like the way she just jumps up out of bed before the alarm even goes off, and calls her assistants in to fix her up. She definitely is demanding, and never hesitant, and you've portrayed that very well here!
Her dialogue is spot on; it's great to see her still trying to hunt for Fluttershy and get her to model some. Though she didn't show up anymore, I find it hard to believe she just let that go, haha. Oh, poor Fluttershy
Is she really supposed to be German? I'm not good with accents unless it's like...British. Or something. Lol. But I can definitely see her being German, and I love that she kinda mixes the German words in with English. And while this doesn't have anything to do with that, I love the repetition of "DEH MAGICKS!" Easily one of the best things Photo Finish said, and I can't see her NOT saying it a lot, haha.
And lastly... absinthe in the morning? LOL. That's certain to lead to nonsense. (: I love her so much.
All in all, another great chapter! I can't wait to see who's next on the list!
| Kittishy chapter 6 . 11/10/2011
i lyk bonuss trol chapta rite moar of dat plz thx
In all seriousness, I think you did a fantastic job here! Definitely looking forward to Night. _
| Questionable Object chapter 6 . 10/31/2011
Naghtmare Moon was the fave one.
I agree with you about the canon Luna.
Keep up the awesomeness Mr/Miss/Ms Rainfall