This was one of the best stories on here but it is unfinished and probably won't ever be update but i would be very happy to be proven wrong.

so far I'm liking the story. my only gripe is the Spartans. it doesn't make sense that unaugmented humans can be in spartan armor. The human body can only handle a limited change in velocity and no amount of technology can change that. that's why augmented humans are a thing. they can handle such speed and the armor can take advantage of that.

in addition it doesn't feel earned giving Michael that armor. there's a reason why the SIV are looked down upon compared to SII and SIII. They went through hell to earn that title and the majority lost what it meant to be a human.

to be fair, going through hell is going to be difficult when the galaxy is at "peace". maybe having similar programs would be the way to go. it might be seen as inhumane but that's the cost of that much strength.

a bit of an off topic, it would be nice portraying humans as not all goody touches. doing so makes humans more of a gray area than the "good" guys

No! I just spent two days reading this then noticed that it hasn't been updated since 2016. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

citadel is 5 km, that ship is 50 km... ten times as big...

this chapter is a bit like Goldilocks lol

lol i thought using a dormant relay was a huge no no? that is the reason for first contact war, and invasion of shanxi?

Really Asari the race name? Lol no, better it be Homo Asari lol xd.

Wow asari are having an existential crisis lmao. They get shia's cousin DNA (I guess a Shia is a dog) or even the Homo Sapiens's cousin (monkey or other humanoid that died before like homo erectus... Etc)
They are toast lmao

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

Prometheans dying off: leave a bunch of cool space highways around
Forerunners dying off: yeah fuck you guys, here's a bunch of galaxy nukes

I suggest to all authors writing Halo fics to consult Halopedia if you're unsure about something and you don't have the relevant books, comics, or games (I don't count the show because it's noncanon). It's the best and most reliable wiki, since it's up to date and well sourced.

I know it has been years since you posted another chapter, but please continue this story it has been a fascinating story so far. thanks

I find it hard to believe the UNSC doesn’t monitor Harvest